EPIC!

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AWWwWwwwwwwwwww loved this fic so much! Hehehee soo glad kevins back and he hasn't lost his *funny* humour!

I thought he was gonna have a hug from Gill and Julie at one point! Awwww!

Hehehee loved this like asdfghJkl

How gill still has a bruised toe! Aww!

And lees line line creased meeee!;D

Write more soooooon:D hehehehe xxx

AMY, I don't know what I can say except, I LOVE YOU. I'm crying now. I love love love circular stories, when things come back round to the beginning, (sorry, I'm odd) and you did it sooooo perfectly. The dinosaur all the way through, and then the bruised toe, and ohmygod (fish) everyone's reactions to getting Kevin back, ohmygod I just want to sit and cry, I LOVE YOU, THANK YOU, I LOVE YOU.

Wow! That was fantastic. I loved all the procedure and the mystery and the case. It was sheer genius the way you turned the crazy starting points into a serious adn consistent story! And one that was frequently hilarious too. I particularly enjoyed all of their reactions to having Kevin back (especially Gill and Julie's) and Gill's general thoughts about people not respecting her authority anymore.

Aww we're finished. I loved this oh so much. Kevin's alive, Julie and Gill are glad he's back, as are we. All's well that ends well. You did a marvelous job sweetie. This is going on my kindle for keeps :D

You actual babe! That was hilarious! Who knew a late night, utterly ridiculous conversation could have created such a lovely story! Well done kid! It was brill! I loved the ending, classic Gill! You babe! Xxx

Where is Kevinnnnnn! I actually thought this one was really good and still interesting even though it was just procedure! Well done kid! Xx

awwww! im so glad they've finally got a confession! i reaaaaaally hope Kevins okay!:(
he needs to be found!;')

great update,loved it!:Dxxx

Evil cliffhanger much! Love this loads and all of Gill's little sarcastic comments are brilliant :D xx

I'd just written half my review and it deleted it all:(
AS I WAS SAYING. I hate 'to be continued' because what if you're eaten by a dinosaur tomorrow and we never get an update? Please don't die. Not only because I want to read whose DNA it is. I also might miss you.
Don't apologise for procedurey stuff, I love it. Love how Gabby seems a little bit uncertain now... mm, I have a sneaky idea of whose DNA it is, but I'll have to wait and see won't I?
"So, I was about to send every uniform in the district out looking for a murder weapon...and it was found by a tree hugger feeding their bizarre hobby at stupid o'clock this morning?" "In a nutshell" - GENIUS.

Aaaargh. You and your cliffhangers. Got all excited and then But...
Meanie, lol but very good :D

Girl. You and your cliffhangers. Well you got the chapter written despite the distractions. I haven't even started my next chapter yet. Great update :D

*bouncing up and down in excitement* The crime and the mystery and the procedures here are all just wonderful. So engaging.
"What would I charge her with, owning a flat faced black rat?" Rolling round the place laughing out loud. And the bit with Janet feeling guilty was flawless.
Emotionally wrecked now after that catch up!

Yes, that last bit did it. Crying now.

Aww Gill and her inappropriate giggling, bless her. Following Gill's imagination was really funny and sad, clever way to tell it. And awwww Julie! If she's all upset in the next bit I may cry.