u still accepting ocs or no?

name:Kp
gender male
hair color black
eye color brown
personality hard working competitive and sometimes nice
outfit black pants blue jacket hoodie red and black cap one strap backpack
whip supporter agencyshipping franticshipping mangaquestshipping oldrivalshipping specialshipping commonershipping kalosshipping all of those (cause they all want him xD)
pokedexholder with: not with a dexholder yet

Name: Star
Gender: Female
Hair colour & style:Navy blue Like dawns but with stars
Eye colour: Ultramarine
Personality: Like dawn without the fashion part
Outfit: Black jeans, navy sleeveless top with a pale yellow star
Shipping supporter: Oldrivalshipping
Love interest: Silver?

Tee hee! Blue's rubbing off on you Silver! On a whim, I've decided to submit an OC for a fanfiction that will probably never be updated again- and I adjusted the name I picked to make it japanese!
Name: Ayaka
Gender: Female
Hair: Red; worn in two waist length pigtails
Eyes: Green
Pokemon partner(s) (I know this wasn't included): Hyperactive Pichu (Pichi) and Eevee (Veeva). Both are female.
Personality: Usually happy-go-lucky, scary when angry, and occasionally Blue-like; sometimes babbles about the awesomeness of a person named Ash.
Outfit: Green t-shirt, yellow capris, charm necklace with pokeballs; usually has a gigantic mallet hidden somewhere somehow that whacks Gold or whoever she's mad at
Shipping supported: All in the story, really; primarily focuses on special and oldrival.
Fan of: Red. Will sometimes run after him for an autograph or shipping proof

Here is my OC hope you like it D

Name of Your OC : (Sorry if its not Japanese) Lightning Sky

Gender: Female

Hair Color and Style: Brown/ Has bangs like Yellow but her hair is not in a ponytail

Eye Color: Yellow

Personality: Nice, Out-Going , Clumsy , gets angry at times .

Outfit: black t-shirt with a blue vest that has a with collar

FanClub or Shipping Supporter: SPECIALSHIPPING!

Name of Your OC: Lightning Sky

Gender:Female

Hair Color and Style: Brown/ her hair is like yellow's but does not have a ponytail

Eye Color: Amber

Personality: Nice and a bit clumsy, and funny too. Can get angry at times. also smart. out-going, friendly. Wears a straw hat with her hair inside it but does not hide her gender.

Outfit: White t-shirt with a brown vest/hoodie (the vest with a hood, you know) blue jeans and brown converse shoes

FanClub or Shipping Supporter: Special Shipping (YAY!)

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will there ever b more T.T

Courtney Kim (sorry)
Female
Dark brown, tight bun with bangs swept to the right side
Dark brown
Smiles often but very proper. Good grades and looks innocent. Loves to sing and help those in need. Very modest and observative. Able to get along with everyone and very skilled in socratic method of debate and reverse psychology.
Long sleeve white blouse with buttons and black pencil skirt. Gold wire frame glasses and black heels and usually carries a book or a notebook and pen. (Also pale skin)
Likes all shippings in story but adores Red and Yellow
Okay with working with anyone.
Partner Pokemon Gardevoir and Petilil. Also has Meloetta, Cherubi, Bellossom, and Espeon.

Wow! this is such a kewl story! promise me some good oldrival and specialshipping moments. u dont need to but please, i would like that. xD the plot is amzing, cute, and funny! if i were in pokemon special, i would be Blue's twin sis and i would help her get every1 2gether. Green's cuzin Gary would be paired w/ me! * blushes * that would be fun. but sadly it ain't real. oh well great story!

name of your oc: light of virdian forest (sorry couldn't find a japanese name)
gender:male
hair color: blond
style: like oz in pandora hearts
eye color: blue
personnality: normal person a little outgoing; he cook a little and a awesome piano artist, he move to sinoh so he could be more known for his piano talent, he battles rarely he doesn't like battling like yellow ( one of his relatives ) his favorite pokemons is a pikachu (nickname thunder), a lucario (nickname aura) and a darkrai (nickname dark)
he support specialshipping (he wants yellow to be happy)

You should do more chapters! This story is awesome ! :) I just want to read until I'm finished. Keepup te good work!

Name of Your OC (try to go for Japanese, please.): Kajou Kaito

Gender:Male

Hair Color and Style:Black, Messy

Eye Color: Brown

Personality: Quiet

Outfit: White Polo shirt with Black Jean

Please make the next chapter ASAP!

OC name: Rusho
Gender: Male
Hair Color: Dark Blue, almost black
Style: Spikey, but messy, kind of like Red's or Dia's hairstyle
Eye color: Blue
Personality: A combination of Pearl and Diamond, but still funny and still a gluton
Outfit: I kind of like him with Diamond's outfit in the Platinum chapter
I choose shipping supporter and I'm with Diamond
Please continue the story

I was instantly reminded of Amotodan in the first chapter, which is also about a school that you cannot reject. So I went past all the Abras to the second chapter, to see if there was a notable difference.

It seems like Amotodan, but where shippings are the main focus. There is even a village, another similarity.

Other than that, I'll say this. You have large amounts of dialogue. Most of it is back-and-forth stuff that is only a single line/paragraph. However, every once in a while, this pattern is broken by huge paragraphs, most often done by the person whose text is bolded. These huge paragraphs are a pain and could probably be separated into two, if not more, paragraphs.

Please continue this AWESOME story! I support all the shippings in your story. I am not sure which pokedex holder I'm with. Please continue the story!