Great story! Love the plot line, I hope you continue it.

please update soon

what is Alice up too, who paid for the trip to Volturi for Bella and her family?

This is such a marvelous, engaging story I'm sad to see it discontinued, but know how that goes. Still, if you wouldn't mind, I'd love to know the basics of the rest of the plot so I can imagine it. There's so many possible ways it can go now, I can't determine which way you would have written it. Thanks for what you have shared with us! Excellent work.

hi, its been a long time since you updated... are you going to finish this great story?

Awesome story dad to see u haven't been able to update for a long while . But I understand real life takes precedence. I really do hope you find it in yourself to complete this story. Ty so much for sharing your story and talent. Dee

Great story, so far! Love it! Very interesting

Please finish this story.

Will you be updating?

I hope that you finish up this story. Loved the idea and writing.

I hope that everything in RL is going better. I miss your story.

I am so distressed right now because I have come to the close of this wonderful story. I honestly can say that I hope you come back and work on it to the end. This is my favorite story over all others I have read, which number in the thousands, literally. This story is well written with good spelling, good grammar, and good flow. Your characters are believable and they stay that way. Please come back and work on this. Write on!

Poor Bella, an angel forever. Cauis is crazy and obsessive. Anyway please write more.

I love Rose's introduction. You are so talented. Please write more.

Oh gosh...there are not words. Come back!