Reviews for As the Universe Conspires |
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![]() ![]() ![]() good ending :) i did not expect it though, such a nice ending. even though there's no universe's conspiracy, i will make them meet in my mind :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I'm cleaning out my old emails right now and I see that I emailed myself back in 2012 linking this fanfiction and told myself to leave a review. Well it looked like I never did. So I'm very sorry, but 5 years later here's the review I wanted to leave you: Omg, this is fantastic. Well written. Sorry it took so long to say! |
![]() ![]() Everyone's pretty much told me about you so let's get this over and done with. Lol Hiko. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This...was...*sob*...per- *sob* fect. No, no I'm not a freak. Just another RK fan reading a good fanfic after a looooong time. |
![]() ![]() YOU, CLEVER, YOU. I love it. From start to finish. Honestly, I was about to skip to the prodigious meeting (which was pretty much the end of the whole one-shot) but the build-up to it was so, so worth it. You had your readers feeling just like Kaoru, I'm sure - the anxiety, the antsy glances around, the suspense! Each scene was so entertaining and each character got their worth of screen-time and humor. I've read a couple of your stories already so I am never disappointed in your writing style or plots... which reminds me, I should go back to those stories and give you your much well-deserved reviews there as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, such a great story! The interaction between Kaoru and her father was hilarious! Loved the way the universe conspired to bring Kenshin and Kaoru together! So sweet ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww.. Well, let's all thank the all knowing, all conspiring universe for finally introducing Kenshin and Kaoru and end the suspense.. XD Cute one shot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love high school fics. Wait let me correct that, I love GOOD high sch fics and yours is just plain awesome. I love how you didn't just hash the cliche high sch fics kenshin/Kaoru comes, falls for each other boom kiss wham sex zap babies! You did a really interesting buildup to it and tantalised us with the ending. As much as I would love a continuation of it, this is pretty muh a perfect one-shot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This might be actually the third high school fic in Ruroken verse that is actually well written and interesting. Well, it is just a short start at the moment, but I got really curious about how you will spin this. So, if the Ruroken mood strikes you, I definitely will be checking out your works. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant! Please tell me there will be a chapter 2. :)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmao conspiracy indeed |
![]() ![]() ![]() You check the obligatory high school fic off your list. Adorably done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hilarious! I can't decide which line is my favorite. I'm torn between these three: "And you know what your problem is? You cast yourself in the role of manic pixie dream girl for Aoshi when you're so much more than that." "Dad, you guys squee over cat pictures. I'm friends with all of you, remember? I can see everything you do." "No, no, I'm not a freak!" I think I might go with the last one D I'm in love with your "As the Universe..." series! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nicely done... love the lighthearted, tongue in cheek touch on cliche bits that made this much more than the typical 'high school' fic. sweet ending. |
![]() ![]() So sweet and cute! It's hard to find good Highschool AUs, but this one definitely makes the cut. :) |