Nice.
Very hot.
Though too much girls at once.
It could have been better if it was spread over 2-3 chapters.

hey there matt this Fic was awesome and very hot however you made one mistake it in the area were you choose who the main character of who is in the fic you put in "naruko Uzumaki" instead of "Naruto Uzumaki" u just thought i would point that out since it may make this story get less views when its deserves way more

I love It ! I really hope you write a sequel

Excellent, thank you for doing this commission.