Reviews for A Love So Broken
myhubbyissoedward chapter 36 . 8/29/2018
So glad you are posting again. Thanks
Liz chapter 36 . 4/16/2018
Please HEA
Guest chapter 30 . 11/4/2017
YES BUT HOW MANY EDWARD?/ He keeps saying "other women" but he sure as shit doesn't give us a number, I NEED TO KNOW!
Guest chapter 20 . 11/4/2017
OHHHH IVE read this before. Edwards a douche, Bella leaves, Edward starts drinking, Edward starts whoring around, Edward starts in on harder drugs, Edward goes to rehab, Edward talks about how leah is just a friend but talks about how hot her ass is all the time, Edward talks about how much he trusts leah, Edward talks about how close he is with leah...leah...leah..leah. Then bella gets back with the used up leah lovin alcoholic whore. EW

Does Bella even ask him how many women hes been with since they broke up? SHE SHOULD! She should also make him get tested...then retested in 6 months BEFORE she touches him.
Guest chapter 12 . 11/4/2017
This is one of those stories where Bella does get "her" Edward back but she gets him back in VERY USED CONDITION right? He out fucking ANYTHING that will let him. And let me guess Bellas been with a whole 1 or 2 guys? It also sounds like Edward is acquiring a drinking habit. So Bella will end up with a alcoholic whore? That doesn't really seem fair. But whatever. GROSS but whatever, not my story.
BrownEyedFluffyOwl chapter 36 . 1/6/2017
Wow...don't listen to so much of the negativity I'm reading below in the reviews section! This story is fab, I've loved reading it and have loved getting to know these two. A positive nudge nudge to you to finish it as its soooo good! Wanting to know where these two end up :) hope everything is well with you. Amy xx
jk chapter 26 . 7/25/2016
sooo this is what bella gets huh...a addict manwhore...im sorry but HOW is this Edward better then the one she left? at least the Edward she left was used up!
jk chapter 17 . 7/25/2016
their still to fucking close...a whole hell of a lot less leah and assward please.
jk chapter 24 . 7/25/2016
Edward and leah are too close for comfort...I don't like it.
I also don't like that leah isn't a bella fan...bella is the one that was wronged...and leah can go fuck herself
jk chapter 12 . 7/25/2016
if Edwards drunk and high all the time and fucking anything willing...surely hes gotten an std by now...
please tell me bella doesn't get back with this used up piece of shit...how many nasty whores has he fucked now?
bella leaves Edward and what does she get when they get back together? a drug and alcohol addicted manwhore? gross
snoopylover60 chapter 36 . 3/19/2016
Gentle nudging :)

Please finish this, I found it and now Im hooked!
jk chapter 27 . 2/4/2016
he makes is sound like bella made soooo many mistakes...and as far as I see it bella did have a right to keep it from him...its not like the baby was born and she was hiding it. its her body and its harder on a woman then a man because its INSIDE HER so I think she had every right to not tell him until she was ready, expecially because they were having problems. She wasn't keeping it from him really just not telling him tell she was ready...and Edwards a fucking piece of shit for acting like bella made mistakes...everything she did sounds reasonable to me. and I'm mad at Edward for never going after her to talk and then when he does its THREE fucking months later..and even then he doesn't say shit except don't leave me again...what is bella supposed to say to that? he hasn't said shit in MONTHS..and then when she sees him again hes a nasty used up whore and addict...I wish bella had moved on..i wish she had a new man for most of the last few years and I hope the sex is the best shes ever had.
jk chapter 26 . 2/4/2016
how many whores are we talking here? and they were all whores...he didn't really know any of them and they went home with him? gross anyway...poor poor poor bella...to have a man that's only ever been with her..and have him treat her like crap only to be reunited with him and hes a addict and whore...that's just sad and bella deserves soooo much better. Edward can just die already...aids perhaps?
jk chapter 17 . 2/4/2016
you say there will be zero Edward and leah in this story...except there is already more then zero leah and Edward...hes in the gym checking her out and thinking about her ass...and shes flirting and touching him...that's more then zero dumbass. and why not leah...you've already made him a nasty used up slut...whats one more whore?
jk chapter 12 . 2/4/2016
this is what I don't get...Edwards the one that fucked up..and instead of bella getting her Edward back and him trying to fix this...she will end up getting a drug addict and aclcoholic manwhore? that doesn't seem fair for bella.
he didn't deserve her before but now? nOT EVEN FUCKING CLOSE
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