So the bride has a grandparents and a little sister and she is a history teacher. Its Cynthia right?

... should I congratulate you for ruining the story? It was mature and very intriguing, but you completely destroyed the mystery of it and made it seem more like a crack story than anything else. I’m out.

Your character's names have me seriously confused. I can't tell who C, or G is, I can never remember single letter names, especially when there's like 7 of them. How many are there? Which pokemon is G? Is C Pikachu?

I can hardly ever tell who's talking. You never properly introduced anybody, and if you did, it was too long after their first appearance. When Saul came in to the story, I was super confused. I was like, "who's Saul in pokemon? Some dead guy, apparently, but what'd he do? He said Snorlax was there, so Saul is probably a human... Is the dead girl a pokemon? Why would he name some pokemon, but not others?"

Story's fine, but I hate your character names. Introduce people properly.

Awesome story! I loved the ending. I remember meeting Red on Mt Silver and losing my shit when his theme song came on. I knew it was game over and I'm sure Blue got PTSD flashbacks.

Did they do “it” before the start of this chapter?

Must have been hard without a leg

It was best ch as chapter so far

That moment when you almost make out with a girl you barely knows because you’re starved for proper human contact and affection.

I like to see a pairing involving Wes the pokemon trainer from the Orre Region with Sinnoh Champion Cynthia or Kalos Champion Diantha. Cool idea huh! :)

A fitting end for this tale. It was an enjoyable story.

Goddamnit. This story is really annoying. Red is kind of sissy.

20/10 most fun I've had reading a story in a long time.

Also, I think it was a massive missed opportunity to not have the announcer be like, "GREAT ARCEUS IT'S RED!"

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nooo leaf died?

Love this! That epilouge was great, just great! I always enjoy that kind of thing!

What the hell?