| Reviews for The Demigod ninja of Olympus: book 1 |
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   marcinkrycki2314 chapter 6 . 2/8 Another novel with nerfed chakra... the fight with minotaur was plain stupid... |
| TBNRkurama chapter 18 . 9/21/2019 THIS IS FABULOUS! Y NOT FINISHE?! It’s great and that was such a cliffhanger! NOOOOOOOO! |
| Borello chapter 18 . 7/11/2019 damnit. the story is great and i hoped to read more chapter. |
| david.teague.3950 chapter 6 . 6/11/2019 I know who Zoe is she's Artemis' Lieutenant at the point in time. I do not know who Gwen is though. I do wish to know who all is planned for Percy, Annabeth is obvious, also, though I don't know yet, what is your end games for Charles Beckendorf and Selena? Will you be giving Percy a Harem, or multiple lovers like Annabeth, Selena, and Hinata? |
| xXKentonHatakeXx chapter 14 . 6/3/2019 Technically, Thalia IS his cousin. |
| ultrachols chapter 6 . 1/15/2019 harem without annabetch. Fuck you and little shit percyslutchan |
| big OOF chapter 2 . 9/20/2018 oof |
| Jiraiya's will chapter 4 . 6/19/2018 If you are wandering who is that sick pervert of a guest well here i am |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/19/2018 "Ahhh was all that was coming from konan's mouth ". You should not do it with your son, you dirty girl |
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/11/2018 Percy is getting a harem, a person who has grown up in western civilization where polygamy is looked down upon. I’m sorry sir but I just don’t see that working out. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/11/2018 Seriously a lightning jutsu that surpasses the master bolt. Sorry sir but I call bs, the master bolt normal blasts could decimate mountains and full power probably a mountain range. The problem with a jutsu that strong is that honestly it’s not realistic. Especially seeing how only two people ever made techniques of such magnitude but still not quite there. Madara and hashirama, but these two super shinobi couldn’t do that. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/11/2018 Why does everyone do all five elements it’s just plain stupid at this point. The only way someone in the naruto universe could have all elements is if they have the rinnengan which even then all elements won’t pop up until it does. Also having more than one element is good but even the greatest of geniuses wouldn’t master much of any of them, they like many would try to focus on all of them if one has a strong affinity for all five. But this makes them a man who is skilled in many but a master of none. Which is bad because sure he’s versatile but lacks the ability to pull through when needed. That’s why all rinnengan users had at least two main affinities and moderate skill in some. |
| kynan99 chapter 1 . 12/8/2017 Thanks |
| Davidlhson chapter 18 . 11/21/2017 Great story shame it seems you couldn’t find the time to finish it oh well still hoping you find the time to continue the story |
| ultralykan chapter 4 . 10/12/2017 thats not how chakra affinity works your parents make it more likely to have a certain type but not 100% |
