Reviews for Haunted
A-Mais-Pura-Preguica-do-mundo chapter 12 . 11/20/2016
This was the best story I read! It's so hard to find a RemusXOC story ... this story fell from the sky, the best romance! It's really painful to have to wait for long months for another chapter ... Update! I love your story!
Guest chapter 11 . 3/12/2016
Love the new chapter! I lov how sweet Remus is now to Ariana. I can't wait to read her detention with Snape Lol! Pls update soon!
Guest chapter 10 . 3/7/2016
Love it! Please keep goin!
Greg chapter 10 . 3/5/2016
Why must you stop there!? It was just getting interesting! I can't wait to see what Remus has to say to Ariana. Please update.
Allison chapter 1 . 3/5/2016
Omg I love this! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please continue!
Jezebel74 chapter 7 . 5/27/2013
Glad that you are finally back! loved the chapter, but please don't make me wait that long for the next one ;)
Guest chapter 3 . 8/17/2012
It's really good! Pretty Please Update!
Guest chapter 3 . 8/14/2012
please update?
Guest chapter 3 . 8/4/2012
I love it please update! :D
Guest chapter 3 . 8/3/2012
Pretty Please Update!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/31/2012
Great story please update!
Angelique Aspis chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
Awww... just saw your author's note! :)

Mystery solved: they're Gryffindors!

I definitely want to know what Mikael is hiding! As for Ariana's secret, I have a suggestion for you:

Ariana has been officially able to use use a wand away from school for a year, AND she comes from a wizarding family so any wand-use at home would not be detected, AND she's an excellent witch, top of her class... do you see where I'm going with this? She should hide and heal her bruises, BUT MIKAEL SOMEHOW KNOWS ABOUT THEM ANYWAY. That would freak her out, and also make a better way to introduce the subject to the readers.

Another suggestion: You've explained what makes Lupin attractive to Ariana, but what makes Ariana attractive to Lupin? If she's pretty, she's not the only pretty girl in the school, and she's not the only talented witch, either. We should see from Lupin's point of view what catches his eye.

Good plot so far!