Agggggggh Cliff hanger

ha... nice story. good plot line so far and the characters are funny. keep it up, this shit's awesome.

This story is pretty cool. It's nice to read a mature MLP story with humans that aren't either complete jerks being mean to the characters or bronies just geeking out about being in Equestria. Keep up the awesome work!

"" where are they?

I didn't find anything wrong. Good job. I look forward to more. :). Oh btw which one are you based on? Or do I have to guess? Lols
Pls continue. Your a good writer.