I really like the "Danny escapes Twist's view/cameras " plot point.
It makes the story more interesting and justifies the focus other character have been getting leading up to this.
I read the version of the chapters from before you went back and edited them in 2017, and it is a very satifying improvement.
(I'm reviewing this chapter because I already left a review on chapter 21.)

It's a beautifully well written story and I want to know how it ends. I know it's been years since it was last updated but it has no right being this good and incomplete.

aHHH THIS was amazing

I love this story, even if it is as cliche as you say. This story and you as a writer are actually what got me into the DP phandom. I had never seen Danny Phantom and I happened across your fics and I've read them and love them even after all these years. I still come back and re-read them. Even if u dislike this one, I still love it and look forward to /any/ updates you post for any stories. So, Thank You!

I understand from some of your other works that after your hiatus all your unpublished/unposted WIPs got deleted...
I really hope you plan on publishing/posting more chapters for this! I really love it and want to read it through the conclusion!
Please please please write more!

Please continue with this story it is amazing

I know you haven't updated since 2016, but I hope you will update again! This is an amazing story and I really love this.

I know it has been a few years since you last updated but I'm holding out hope. Although the field trip trope is super common, I feel like this story is one of the more unique ones. I wasn't suspecting a hunger games style twist with all the cameras when I started. Seriously, this story is entertaining even if it is cliche due to its conception when you were a kid. Thank you for the time that you have put into this so far. I hope you are doing well during the quarantine.

Oh my God... It's just day 4 yet it felt like they've been there for a week at least... I love your writing, it's so good and the story is just... AAAAA- I don't know how to describe it. I do hope that you'll continue to update soon 3

I know it's been a long while since this updated and that's totally cool, but I haven't slept and this has got me wigged out. I love it. It keeps me on my toes and the writing is easy to follow and it's just overall really cool

Here's a little wilderness first aid knowledge I've got that might make your story more realistic if you choose to use it. When resetting a dislocated shoulder, taking it and yanking it in 100% won't work. Here's how you do it: put your hand on your head, move it down to your neck, then reach towards the opposite shoulder, focusing on staying relaxed. Eventually if you're relaxed enough you'll get a pop but I don't know if this method works really well. Another way: lie on your stomach and bend your elbow up at a right angle. Slowly get someone to rotate your hand back up towards your head. Hopefully it'll pop into place, if it doesn't, well try not to throw up because your arm's probably at a REALLY weird angle behind your head by now. Like rotated way too far. Try again. This might work on yourself if you're standing, can pull your arm around right, and if you don't pass out from the pain bud idk lol they don't teach that in red cross.

The best way though is to just lie on your stomach and hold a weight on the dislocated side. Relax and then your shoulder will pop back in without hurting TOO bad. Not really relevant to this story though because I've only seen emergency resetting so far that's gotta be fast.

Dude this is amazing u should update it now

I can’t believe that i have to finish this story on a cliff hanger. i don’t even know if you’re active at all, but i will resort to begging because i really need to know how this ends. it’s so good!

I really love your writing style! It’s so much fun to read!

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