Not bad.. not bad at all!

Wow! That was VERY good!

This is one of my favorite stories. I have read it several times and each time I am amazed at the depth of characterization and angst. However, each reading loses something with all the lack of correct grammar and punctuation. How difficult would it be to reformat using italics, bold lettering, and appropriate quotation markings and repost this wonderful story?

Can't believe I had never read this story. Amazing angst and characterisation, hope you still write in whatever fandom you choose as you are to good a writer.

Hard to read but a great read. Good character studies and a heart breaking twist. Brava.

This was an amazing story! I loved very minute of it! The twist at the end with Daniel was just brilliantly done & the way S/J found their way back to each other & the talk they had at the end was just heart-breakingly beautiful! I really really loved it!

Can't believe it doesn't have more reviews than it does because it certainly deserves them! Will be recommending this story to quite a few of my friends to read as well!

Thanks for all your fantastic works...it is very rare for me to find new SG1 stories that I haven't read before so I love that I found yours...even if it is many years since you completed them!

So I know I'm very behind the times in reading all of your stories, but I'm really enjoying them!

Just finished the first chapter of this one & it was brilliant! What has been done to Sam & Jack is just horrific but I'm looking forward to seeing how it will resolve itself & maybe a bit more of what they went through while they were being held and how they survived! :-D

wow, what an emotional story

Loved it ! x

Stunning. Brilliant. Everything is so understated, which makes it all the more powerful... I could see the characters' expressions and hear the voices. You are a truly gifted writer. Love the "memo" device.

oh my god im crying.

im litterly crying like a baby.

no ones ever gotten me that emotinal whit their writing, ever.

i like the ending very much.

and im glad that Sam and jack finally made up.

youre plot is great.

and you are a fantastic writher.

Exceptional work. Haunting imagery and what-if. Tragedy and redemption that the series hints at but here is beautifully rendered. A gem worth finding.

WOW!

I'm pretty much on a marathon of reading all your fics, and I LOVE TIHS ONE!

Just... WOW... I LOVe this kind of story! and it even had a happy(ish) ending! :D:D:D

GREAT story!

MSam

Oh this is one of the best storys I have ever read!

Unbelievable! Simply unbelievable! This fanfic is the epitome of great writing. I couldn't even put it down. Sheer greatness. Indeed an epic tale that I would read over and over.

I really don't know what to say, except that I cried for the first four chapters, and wept for the last three. This was amazingly well done, but really, really upsetting. I'll say again, your writing was fantastic. The symbiote/host relationship of the Tok'ra was one of the best I've ever read, and your other characters were equally well done. Teal'c's death scene was wonderfully awful, and Daniel's was even better/worse. I think, though, the best part was watching Sam and Jack work through their guilt, both separately and together. The one change I might have recommended was putting the flaskbacks in italics or something. Often, I would be half way through before I realized that we'd jumped. Regardless, this is one of the most amazing and well written fan fics I've ever read. I will definitely be back to this one again. . .once I find another box of kleenex, anyway.