'I fell into his chest, pounding my fists against him. I let out a tortured sob and heard my voice crack as I yelled at him, "Wake up! Wake up, wake up, wake up!" I screamed at him, each time slamming my fists against him harder. I fell apart, collapsing into his chest and grasped at his shirt that I was soaking with my tears. The doctors left me be, giving me looks of pity. There was nothing they could do, anyway. I looked up at Eddie's face, crying hard.' Absolutely perfect.

I cried tears of sorrow. Nice job. :,)

i cried when i read this. i am still crying now as i write this. it was only a short story, a sweet one-shot. i have nothing else to say. keep writing.

nnnnnnoooooo please let eddie live polease do more i am crying my eyes out herd for eddie sghould live

Oh, the emotional feels! This was so good, and now I'll go cry. Why must you hurt me in this way?! D:

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Why would you write this! I cried! Other from the saddness that was AMAZINGGG

You need to do another chapter, where mabey it does work, and he magicly comes back totlife because... oh i don't know, mabey somthing happens...? well anyway, it's a great story!

you should do another chapter that eddie comes back to life cause its a sad ending and i love peddie moments

Oh my gosh! Tear jerker. Read this and i seriously had trars in my eyes by the end. Wow. Great job.

Sad, but really good! I loved it!

:'( This was so beautifully sad. But extremely well written and wonderful as always!

It really sucks that Eddie is dead, but rift now I son't date because this was brilliant, just like always ;)

Aww! That was so sad! Why did you have to runin Peddie?

DRAGON PARANORMAL

I hate you. I'm sobbing and making unhuman sounds ;-; ugh...