Good story

I think yourfirst ever fan fic was way better than mine. the plot moved nicely, and it made sense, not having illogical twists in it. so, I think this was good one, and bet you will be liked when you keep writing more.
good luck

That story was sexy and hot and I love them both they are so damn hot when will u write more story like these

aww :)

Go Al! Lol that was great ) It could be a tad more life like in the dialogue, but the transitions were awesome sauce.

Nice. Be the tough brother for his older brother. Now I begin to find the reason that those two are closer than ever. Like Ed and Roy. *In people's view's Father and Son or Lover and Lover*

Anyways, I love it:D

ehehehehhh dont mess with the tin can :P

Is this really your first? Very good! Better than my first -.-"
Keep up your good work!

This is FLIPPING AWESOME! Yay RoyxEd mushy-gooey-fluff! Thank you for writing this, I greatly enjoyed it!

Very nice and for a first story great! I wish you had taken it a bit slower, perhaps had Ed and Winry come to some sort of resolution (or you can start to fill in bits by writing other short stories that take place in this same storyline), but other than that it was a very well written cute story!

I love it, its sooooo cuute : 3

This is AMAZING! I almost couldn't beleive this was your first fanfic! RoyxEd is my favorite pairing! I think it's SOOOO cute! I especially loved the ending! It made me laugh!

Please make a new fanfic ASAP! :D

First fanfiction? IT'S REALLY GOOD! :D