This is incredibly well done, I think. I was amazed at how so much was conveyed in so few words, and I loved the way the last scene related back to the first one and made everything seem so complete.

I really liked this. I thought it was a very nice little piece and you wrote it extremely well. Keep up the great work!

Not bad, this caught my interest. It made me feel bad for Steven, seeing these girls, and not being able to develop relationships with them.

I was hoping to see another chapter before realizing that this is a one-shot.

Although I say the part with Wallace kissing Steven was a little...odd (even though it was by accident), this story is what I consider to be an honorable mention.

Good job
:D

I haven't seen a whole lot of Steven/Flannery, and this was an adorable way to do it. The shortness of each section helps it flow well and I love the paper airplane letters for Steven's mom... Steven's done really well here.