Great story! At this rate I might have to check out all of your stuff.

Lol EAT MY BALLS YOU BEAST... UGH FIREBALLS! Lol eww now I know why she said ugh after saying eat my balls, because only guys have balls not girls

hmm...A connection to "through her burning gaze" when finn mentions mount cragdor?
ha awesome wish this was cannon!

I am pretty sure that fp making the rocks get in fire whas a reference to the clasicc ben 10

Tinfoil for the winn!you are a true flinn supporter

Wait that's what Jake was drawing? Lol

Great story:)

I love your creators of 'Adventure Time' should make this story into an episode.

i really love this fanfic not only is it cute and nice but it explanes some of teh things that happen after hot to the touch like how she got her house and how they found out that tin foil stoped her from burning things not only that its just a really cool fanfiction to read :D

Que concidencia, este fic me avia gustado y al releerlo veo el autor haha no me avia dado cuenta,
me gusto como manejaste lo de la aldea de los merodeadores, (no muchos se dieron cuenta de eso,) aunque pornto explicaran eso. saludos.

Wow. I never realized how much a bridge between Hot to the Touch and Burning Low was needed. Tres bien!

For the sake of reviewing and this story's language, I'll do it in English, but don't worry, I speak Spanish as my native language, just in case you're wondering.

The only think I can object into this is that... Finn's hair is likely to be a lot longer that what your picture it in your reference image XP. (Note: I freaking love your Ice Queen avatars XP)

Other than that, this story is completely and unquestionably AWESOME, not only it makes a great tie-up to what it is Burning Low, but the use of characters, references and hints for other episodes makes it flat-out perfect and fitting, this could perfectly be canon, just go and rub it into Ward's face while you're at it, you might get a job creating Adventure Time XP.

I can only suggest that you create and alternate version of the upcoming episode, Lady & Peebles, changing out PB for Flame Princess, I just think a 'girlfriends looking for their mans' would fit nicely hehe, but hey, I'm just saying, because you'd do a great job, just like you did in this, just... congratulations D!

excelente historia, aunque esta en otro idioma pude leerlo, me gusto mucho, esto podría contestar el ¿cuando se volvieron a encontrar y porque le estaba construyendo un a casa?

For lack of a better way to express my gratitude, thumbs up

I love it! A perfect transition story.

Love how you blended the ending with the start of "Burning Low." everyone was 100% in character- Very nice piece!

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