Help me call my love that I love her so much in person of Ajokeade 08165277766

Awww! Was it Soul playing the piano? I think the first attempt was better, but that's just me.

i like attempt 1 better you should continue it

Wait what was the first chapter a dream or something

I like that

This was *swipes away a tear* so cute...

-Oh, and please tell me when you've finished the entire series-

Sorry, I wrote that really, really late. I'm kinda surprised I made perfect sense on the rest of it, lol.

Mr. A

That was nicely written and I enjoyed it. My personal views on romance are complicated, so I rarely find something that grabs me. This was very nice and thank you for rewriting it, and I hope that you enjoyed doing this again. And yeah, I won't be reading Disappointment Around Every Corner.

I read another SoulXMaka vs KidXMaka story before, and I mostly read it because of how dark, bloody and shocking it was. It even had Kid getting tortured and eventually killed at some point. (I dropped it shortly before it ended.) So yeah, not amused by KidXMaka, and I love Kid! I just find that pairing stupid.

Oh, quick question. What was your initial reaction to Asura waking up at the end of the series' first half? I was a bit freaked/creeped out... I mean seriously! That whole scene is just such a WTF moment! Oh, and please when you've finished the entire series.

Mr. A

When you do rewrite this don't replace this one with it. Just put it up separately in case anyone really enjoyed this. Just title it "Confession Time Alternate Version" that way if anyone enjoyed this it won't screw them over. You were probably planning to do it that way anyway, but I just wanted to make sure this one wasn't deleted. :)

Mr. A

SO KAWAII I MIGHT DIE ! Poor Spirit he must be so sad.. And angry . i love it ! , im obsessing over SoMa one-shots xD

Sure. Like I said before it doesn't need to be melodramatic, they don't need to be tearing up or dramatic, just a very simple warm moment. Just imagine that. They already know each other better than anyone else, and they probably have already understood that they love each other for a long time at this point. This is just where they decide to start a real romantic relationship.

Oh, and make it to where they are both already there instead of Soul asking her to come, it kind of gives that feeling that they have a mutual understanding of each other. Oh and yes, make sure there is nice, big warm hug. x) Other than that, have fun and make sure to put all your love for this pairing in to it!

Mr. A

Excuse me, I thought it missed the point slightly, not too bad though.

Before I get on with my thoughts let me just say that I'm flattered you dedicated this to me, and thank you so much for writing it to begin with. But it wasn't what I was looking for. Let me explain.

That wasn't bad. Maybe I should have clarified a bit more or something, but I was kind of looking for a more intimate fic. I'm glad you put your own creativity into it, but I thought it was a little overcomplicated by a few things.

The idea in my head, and the idea I was trying to communicate to you was that there wouldn't be any real argument, or trying to pull a confession out of the other, or embarrassment. It would just be them warmly telling one another how much they love the other, warmly embrace in some manner, and go home. No embarrassment, no drama, just a very warm and mushy romantic scene.

It might have been really short without these, but I thought adding their argument there, the bits where he was standing on the edge, and then Spirit's interruption were unnecessary. Spirit's part especially, I usually don't enjoy "humorous" interruptions in a love scene at all. Sorry, just needed to be said. :/

Bottom line, and this is my opinion. Some of it was quite unnecessary, and it wasn't nearly mushy, sentimental, and romantic enough. Ugh, it's hard to explain what I'm talking about. Let me put it this way. What I wanted to see was Soul and Maka having a very emotional and personal moment together, not a cute, fluffy and funny type of thing that one-shots usually are.

All of that being said, I'm still thankful you wrote this and I hope others will enjoy it... but this fic really missed the point of my idea.

Mr. A