I have a question? Why now does the text lines separate and not in the previous chapters? I'm just curious.

Wow three chapters in and this story has already broken the top as well as the bottom of the mood barometer.

It would be the perfect R3 makeup reunion fluff happiness thing, but then there is Bloodbeard, and everything goes to shit

How can this be so brilliant and fucked up at the same time? Not sure i want to meet you irl author-kun...

I think I remember reading this back before it was completed... Was this always rates T? lol
I might have to give it a reread

wish it was cc who's alive instead of kallen.

the wizard of oz

holy shit

this story is very messed up, extremely messed up. if the creator did this, i'm sure a few people would die in the real world.

Just saying. This writing is so good because the premise doesn't make me want to spoon out my own eyeballs. It's incredible keep it up

Hi.
This is an awesome work of yours. Cant wait for developments.

(This is an overall review for the full story as I basically binge read it in one sitting.) This was a beautiful fanfic that really brought out a lot of depth in the characters from CG. It was great to see the various Black Knights beyond the limited perspective the anime gives them and how they grew over the course of 50 chapters (would try to be specific but I don't have time to go back). Bloodbeard was also a surprisingly well rounded OC as his role complemented Lelouch very well and his character developed over time without losing his core depravity. I did find the final battle a little one sided in favor of Lelouch and his friends but I can see it makes sense as Lelouch and co did spend 3 months training while Bloodbeard's abilities seemed to have plateaued much earlier.

One thing I wish there was more of would have been giving Kallen a more active role as she was mostly sidelined compared to the anime. This makes sense considering her position, but her character makes it seem like she would have had more to say/do. Additionally, we never really got to see a lot of the abilities of the other Black Knights in action extensively, but obviously there is the constraint of time and length, perhaps they could be expanded upon in the sequel?

Finally, from a technical standpoint, there were some mistakes with words, grammar, etc. that were distracting at times, but I was binging and couldn't bother to stop to note them down :P I think the most common grammatical issues were tense shifts in verbs, but overall it wasn't a big deal.

Again, great story. Good luck on the rest of your work!

Is it that the story will just pick up in excitement or is that whenever I pick a random chapter it's somehow amazing?

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!

Morgen is using Naoto 's soul?!

FOR A SEQUEL?!

Ummmmmmm... What the hell? Naoto? Is there a Adolf Hitler jr here? And this chapter makes 8 that I've read so far.

Merry Christmas. Loved the chapter.

Rename this fanfic, making a religion