Reviews for Strange Beginnings
Guest chapter 45 . 12/22/2019
Over exaggerated damsel in distress character, all Talida did was get herself in trouble, and then need Optimus or jack to save her. seems a bit sexist if you ask me. Jesus Christ let her save herself for once
Realmsmith chapter 2 . 11/15/2019
prime was the best.
Guest chapter 45 . 7/31/2019
Very well done. Some parts were very disturbing, however that was wonderful
Guest chapter 30 . 12/6/2018
I'm just gonna go out and say this. in chappie 22, you said she hadn't been raped yet right before the escape. This seems like a cheap plot twist.
Guest chapter 10 . 11/29/2018
Damn, Jack's picked at Ratchet.
Guest chapter 7 . 11/26/2018
Sorry to bother. But you say here in chapter Michael Darby was killed in Desert Storm, but later in chapter 25 you said the building collapsed on him during 9/11. Is there something I dont know here?
myra chapter 33 . 10/31/2017
WWWWWHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYY!
myra chapter 24 . 10/30/2017
i hate to croorect you but it is creature double feature , not wreather double feature.
myra chapter 21 . 10/30/2017
What! If i was tilda i would etheir
A - faint
or
B -squeal my head off.
Ratchetlover chapter 3 . 8/26/2017
Hi my name is ratchetlover. This chapter was amazing. I loved how you put a flash back into the chapter. It really helped me to understand the story more!
Paradox Seekeress chapter 45 . 8/25/2017
Omg that is so awesome owo if it's gonna continue please dooooooooooooooooo
Guest chapter 7 . 7/12/2017
NICE!~
Arcee Prime chapter 10 . 6/2/2017
So cute
Arcee PrimeP chapter 8 . 5/31/2017
OMFG! So fucking cute! :P
Christina Pax chapter 25 . 1/20/2017
Dude so love this story!
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