It's been years are you ever going to update ?
This is amazing

Wahhh! Please update soon! This story is so good. I love your Hitomi and her relationship with Sasuke. I would be cool if she turned her affections to Naruto.

Okay I just checked and you haven’t rewritten this story!This is really a good story and I hope you rewrite someday soon or continue with this one since I had no problems reading it!

This is amazing I’ll go ahead and read the rewritten version!

Kabuto was actually supposed to be 12 not 8 cuz ur supposed to add 4 since they’re 4 years old. The 8 is their age gap.

Are you still planning a rewrite?

Got to chapter 7 and like it so far.
I like this story and how Hitomi met Neji. I hope Hitomi and Neji will be shipped as a couple in the future. Hinata should still end up with Naruto because she genuelly loves him.

As for Sakura, why do you keep writing her old name instead of her Uchiha name as Hitomi? It is confusing.

As far as the Ninja academy approaches, shouldn't Hitomi wait until she enrolles into there to meet and befriend Naruto, instead of chasing him around the village?

And when Hitomi starts going to the academy I hope she will make lots of friends. Ino would probably be her best friend again and this time there won't be any rivalry to break their friendship.

All in all, I'm waiting for the next chapter.

I was wondering if you were going to rewrite this story anytime soon as it says the rewrite is coming soon. I am hoping for you to rewrite it. To myself the story isn't that bad, it's hard finding a story like this one where Sakura is reborn into the Uchiha clan (e.g. Martyr by lilacwrath). I actually do like this story though its a bit different than Martyr because Sakura was born as the eldest child instead of being younger than Sasuke by like 10 secs.

Hey, just wondering, you you ever consider updating this story?

More please like really have been waiting forever

Again, the things that the author's notes say are fine, but it would be less distracting if they were all at the bottom of the chapter, rather than scattered throughout.
Other than that, the story is fine. I especially like the distinctive voices for each of the characters.
Also, minor typo in the last section : Hguya - Hyuga.

In general, in-text author's notes are somewhat distracting from the story. I appreciate the attention to culture, but it would probably break the flow less as a footnote.

Actualiza pronto.

Hola este es mi primer comentario pero ua habia leido tu fanfic hace muchos años y habia dejado comentario con otra cuenta, sabes espero que pronto actualices.
I like fanfic and l love.

Sua fanfic e muito boa
Mas se vc quiser reescreve la tudo bem
Nao me incomodo com isso
Apenas me avise onegai pois sempre estou de olho apenas aguardando vc postar