This is absolutely perfect! I'm close to squealing with happiness! You did a wonderful job expressing Dan's confusing emotions, and Phil's adorable innocence. Thank you so much for writing this!

By far, Best fluff I could ever ask for.

It seems more realistic now that it doesn't involve rude writing -.. Not like I don't read them.

So cute, the way you write dialogue is heavenly.

ITS SO FLUFFY IM GONNA DIE!

Too perfect! …sequel?
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Awwww, this is adorable! I really loved it, good work! :3

This is incredible, please write more!

I know it says this is complete but I would love you forever if you wrote more!

Younow should keep going on this story, it could realy be something, and if so please don't rush their love interests, drag it out (but not to much ofc) play around a bit, involve a girl on Phil's side or something like that, nothing supernatural :S doesn't quiet fit in their "world" x) Sorry if I'm to much just relay like this kind of realisation of the story, and it can be relay good whiteout any physical drama like car accidents or cancer :) Love the way u whrite, real talent! :D Sorry, again... I'll just shut up now... :$

AMAZING, I am like screeching here
this is the best fanfiction I have read so far that has mirrored Dan like he was actually speaking and all that!
Please update soon! I really want to see Phil's reaction to Dan!

awesome, i loved it :3

please could you make a next chapter? :)

*gasp* OOH THE FEELS! *faints*

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too dramatic?

This is so adorable! You should of continued it!

awww:) I really LOVE this one!