This is so good! I'm going to be so sad when you end it D:
I also like the fight between Bolin and Mako (I personally like him too). Kaiyo also seems really awesome too c:

This could really turn out well if you only carry on...

This is seriously almost over?!
I hope they have earthbending insurance on that apartment. If such a thing exists.

I love the way you write Kaiyo. Her reluctance and determination and beliefs seem real.

Way to deflect Mako's suspicions, Bolin. ;)
Great chapter.

I love Bolin.
This looks like it's going to be a wonderful story.

I'm enjoying the story. Can't wait for the update.

nice story. it reminds me of warriors by erin hunter. forbidden romance, total knockout! oh ,i just thout of this idea where bolin has a handmade "Guide To Smack Mako With or Without Reason When He Obviously Needs It" or something like that. Bolin could read something out of it(oh, did i mention that Bolin made it?) and then smack Mako the number of times required. Not to many times, not to little. And Bolin could make up a sarcastic(yet hilarious) comment to go with it. 4 ex. WHAT DO DO WHEN MAKO SCCARES YOU SENSLESS.
a) Scream and slap (S.S)1-2
b) Read rule and slap (R.S)3-4
c) Lecture and slap with guidebook(L.S)5-6
and so on.(oh and the numbers were the scare rate and i only

Wow! This chapter was..MIND-BLOWING!
I love these few lines a lot. I mean, I never thought of the Equalists in this way!

"Do you really think equality is achieved by taking away any talent you are born with? Like denying a swordsman a sword or a painter a brush just so everyone can be exactly the same?"

"Equality isn't making everybody the same, it's doing your best to give everybody the same opportunities to succeed."

And I really liked these lines :)

"Being born with bending can provide you with opportunity, just like being born with money or fighting skills will lead to opportunity. We're still trying to build this city where people aren't hedged into different classes at birth, but forcibly ripping talent from people is not the way to do it."

Anyway, I really liked this chapter :) The dialogues were really nice and well-written :)

Aww... sweet

I love the chemistry. It is so forbidden and gives Bolin a maturity and comfort level that his character requires.

I loved the imagery in this chapter. I could imagine everything that was napping and it was wonderful! Please update soon!

I love the idea of Bolin not wanting to fight her but I kind of want her to become some sort of secret girlfriend, like romeo and Juliet style before they are forced into a final battle and one of them saves the other and they just break up the fight. For that part I would say Bolin saves her from Mako, Korra, or Lin and then makes a giant wall between the two groups with incredible bending power and saving her in the end, but that would be much later. Keep the idea I like it.

Update soon please!

Ah :D I love this story so much! Your OC isn't like a Mary-Sue at all, it's great! You're obviously a really good writer, and I hope that there will be plenty more chapters to come!