This is awesome. Looking forward to the next chapter

I like your writing style for the most part, but you're overusing titled scene breaks or whatever the proper term is for that. Things like "Hotel Suite, 70th floor:" work well in longer pieces where there's at least a few full paragraphs between them, but they get to be a real headache when there's only a few lines of dialogue separating them. Try to work the scene changes into your narration or, if that's not working for you, tweak your formatting a little.
Putting them in italics as you have been makes the entire page look like one long piece and it's irritating when the flow of that piece is broken. You can use formatting to fix this by breaking the page up into smaller visually using line breaks or spaces. You could also try using bold for the scene change titles which would give the reader a clue that the scene is changing before they get there, just having them in italics means that they fade into the narrative and come as an irritating surprise, especially for fast readers.

Ah oh no poor tasha

What?!

HI back! I like the story, it's great :)

Great job yet again! Hope Clint will be all right. Thanks for telling us how many more chapters!

Awww... He picks her up to carry her to bed. How romantic! Great job again! Would love to know the reason why Nat was in Clint's room. That's my only suggestion but it's not really needed. Gives the reader liberty with it. However, again, I'd love to know. Your choice. :) Loved this chapter!

I am in love with this is beautifully written and the dialouge is perfect!

Was the Morgenstern a Mortal Instruments Reference?

Lovin it!

Oooh... Can't wait to see what'll happen. Get back safely and update! :)

Awww... such sweet emotion. Great job and keep it up!