its great:)

Wow. That was a good story.

I love the part of the Father and Daughter Dance! It is adorable! I love it!

Thats so sweet

R u a Christian? I am.

Aw, I luv this song! And you're one of the few people on this site who knows about Thomarie, which I personally adore :D

That is so cute! That is the definition of father-daughter relationship right there!

This is so adorable! I love it when people write stories about Marie, she is like a missing character in the series. And you captured her character perfectly! Of course, she isn't a real character, so there is a bit of leeway that writers can use, but yours was terrific :)

I especially liked when Marie called them Mama and Daddy at age 22, right after Tommy had proposed. So good!

Again, amazing job!

Yayayayayayayay cutecutecutecute PLUS THOMARIE!

My mom, me, and my dad, love this song. As SOON as 4-year-old Marie asked I knew, I knew it was Cinderella. (I'm crying now BTW) I love this song and it means alot to me to see a fan fiction of it. "She came home today, with a ring on her hand. Just glowin' in(IDON'TREMEMBERDAWORDSHERE)
She said 'Dad the weddings still, six months away, and I need to practice my dancin'. Oh please! Daddy please! So I danced with, Cinderella. I don't wanna miss even one song, its all to soon, the clock will strike midnight! And she'll, be, gone." If you haven't heard that song then you ain't even alive! Everybody, should here it, and its beautiful daddy/daughter beautifulness!

Aww! This was adorable. I can totally picture them dancing.

I really loved this story! It's so sweet! Thanx for uploading it.

So awesome! I love a good family story!

That was sweet. but sad that Phineas were so depressed at the beginning. and poor marie, no birthdytrip.