in fact, mary is unable to exit the picture universe because she is not a real person, subsequent updates have added a section where Mary exits the picture universe and does not enter the real world . I'm sorry if you don't understand, I don't speak much English.

I am LOVING this so far!
...Just, I think I came a little late to this fandom *sweats nervously*
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'Mitsuketa, atashi no koi'...
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I'm not gonna be rude but that literally translates to 'Found was, I of carp'
*collapses laughing*

so...r u still continuing dis? pls dun abandon dis story..
oohhh...juz wen things suddenly gets more interesting..

I love the ib and Garry pov but mostly Garry's

More interested in the mary x garry parts :)

I think it would be interesting if the relationship between Mary and Ib started off with a yandere onesided love from Mary, and overtime Ib grew possessive/obsessive feelings towards Mary but more like overly attached, overly protective big sister feelings rather then actual love.

Please continue this, I really want it to keep going! It's great!

Seems good so far. One thing that I'm wondering is if Garry x Ib x Mary is the final pairing or just showing Garry and Marys one-sided feelings to Ib (at least at the moment anyway)

Nooo! Don't end it there D:

It was really getting good!

(Its been like two years since you updated xD, Whelp, moving on I suppose :(

I love the cat xD, and your OC is pretty interesting too! :)

I just finished watching Pewds play IB too!

Really cool game, and great job with the fanfic! :D
(But I did feel a though Mary never got a happy ending with Ib, so thanks for this :)

Just read the first paragraph of this chapter. Who is Meooww!? Like when did a cat come in the game... or story!?

I thought the first chapter was it and no more, but then I saw 7 more, and I'm like WTF!?
Anyway good story, so far.

You haven't posted in a year and 7 months. Art thou living?

You write beautifully and describe Ib's world perfectly.