Loved it. And I love, love, LOVE that you included Rhodey too. So many of these old stories tend to act like he doesn't exist when he's been Tony's best friend since college. Great story.

That was really good.

Heroes Forever!

Wow exactly story.

Nice story.

Actually, Shawarma is a really popular food here in the middle east, and it's one of my favorite sandwiches ever. Good job on the fic btw! Loved it!

This was awesome and it made me laugh.

This is beautiful and I love how Pepper and Rhodey are all "fuck you and the high horse you rode in on, you're not touching my boy!"

this was just so precocious i love it and o my god was this funny and yes i can see tony and rhodey having the no kidnapping discussion.

This was great. I love how protective Rhodey and Pepper are over Tony. And I love it when Tony isn't utterly useless and stupid in fanfictions, especially when he speaks other languages. Some people make him out to barely know Spanish, when in reality, he's ran an international trading company since he was 21. You've got to know a lot of languages to trade stocks with other countries.

Pleeeease write more, I need a million chapters of this

brilliant

To start: Omg I loved this fic and it's amazing. Also: I'm re-reading this for the 2nd time and going through it more carefully. Personally I think Rhodey and Pepper would be more yelling and less hugging but that's just me. I love love love the fic though!

Love it! Lots of people ignore Rhodey and Pepper where the other Avengers are involved and you didn't and it's great!

Beautifully flawed, and because of it, so very perfect for the group. It always irked me a bit that these strong individual "I work alone" characters are pushed together and people just expect them to stay together just like that. They're strong personalities with strong reactions, and there's bound to be quite a bit of flak from it all. Anyway, I adored this m'dear.