Hey, really good stories I COMPLETELY LIKE KH:LAD and I'm going to read KH:TKW, this story of Xion (one of my favorite characters of KH) is very cool but i really hate Vanitas for what he did to Ventus (another one i like) but my Favorite is Roxas Continue like this Bro

This was short and sweet. Maybe a bit too short to build a relationship with, but I was entertained.

I'd be more sorry for the outcome if it didn't help Rion :p

U had a little spelling errors though out this chap i couldnt help but lol whn i was reading when vanitas said "i know for a face that xeahnort is just using us" etc XD GReat lil mini series i really liked the part where xion met riku & how dramatic you were with the ending of chap 11. U r improving as a writer just watch those spelling errors.

Roxas' duel wielding came from Ven. Sora can duel wield two.

3 ! this is awesome!

Omg that was just awesome. I like the soft side of Vanitas no one really knows. It's nice. Great work on the story.

Omg that was awesome but I'm sad it ended. Really good story though.

Oh that was sad. :(

It's really sweet. You did well.

Too bad that never happened though, I wish someday you will write the story after the Kingdom Hearts III: The Keyblade War, where Vanitas ended up in Dark Margin and tried to start anew as good guy.

Nice story, and I'm so waiting for your Divinity TW1IGHTMAST3R.

So that's why she changed so much when facing the heroes! Though I wonder if Vanitas prefer her old self instead the darkside one (sniff) now I'm starting to sympathize with Vanitas );

(Dundundunduuuun) Ahhhh, this is the most thing I couldn't bear to imagine if happened in the game! Why did you choose that Xion? Whhhyyyyyyy?!

So that's her decision eh? Well, that explains everything.

Oh boy, Riku forgot about her? T_T too sad.

LucasArts is now part of Disney? Come on! I think that statement alone will tell you what to put into for the next story with KH. Revenge of the Sith but with Sora in a Jedi outfit! Can you not think of the possibilities?