The premise is good. Still to show Harry cannot be successful without Hermione's brain/help or a brain like her. Or he couldn't back then get any other help when people were still alive! Just plain stupid.

Another great story on this website

Hardly going to bad, stupidity can’t be fix, Hermione going with moron just crap and shit smell will not go. Bad start stupid story

"Why do you fight now? After all this time?" Rose asked him, staring into green eyes that once again shine with the passion of the emerald curse that have them fame.
"Because now I have someone to fight for."

This was really nice and really fulfilling. I wish you had spent a bit more time fluffing the new Hermoine Harry romance to highlight that he was happy, and had a fulfilling life, but you at least indirectly stated it. Still it could have been a bit more developed I felt.

Still, this was a very fun, fulfilling story. Thanks for writing it!

I really liked it )

Great chapter! Loved the ideas, they flowed very well and complimented the story amazingly well.

Thanks!

Wow! it was something to read... theatrical in the end with some "appearances" (don't want to spoil) but still in the good way as respecting characters and behaviors...
Anyway, thank you for your story

Great story! Thanks do much for sharing!

great
the authors rant

Okay. You addressed/explained the lack of truth serum and I respect that. The end was cheesy as all hell and, while I don’t particularly like cheese it wasn’t unbearable this time. There’s only one thing I didn’t like and it’s entirely subjective; I was hoping for some Harry/Rose romance. If you actually went down that route it admittedly would have felt forced, but because you didn’t the somewhat light chemistry between them made me want it.

.. they don’t have truth serum? Is this one of those stories where you blatantly ignore the most reasonable avenue of progression to unnecessarily drag things out?

I’m a bit confused. Rose used the killing curse several times during her mission.. why couldn’t she use Harry’s wand (or the wand she has now) to destroy the horcruxes? For that matter, why didn’t Harry? He doesn’t seem to a abhor killing, and killing pieces of Riddle should be easy for him.

Why would guns stop working? They’re mechanic.. I’m pretty sure there’s no electricity involved.