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limonium chapter 1 . 6/2/2014 Well the prompt revealed everything and it's not as simple as we thought it was. God, this was so good but heart-breaking too. I wanted to slap Draco in the end lmao. Great job with this though. |
purplepam chapter 1 . 4/20/2014 Oh!This was so so sad...I can't understand why both of them cheated. And when I read the last few lines, I was heartbroken, because when Draco forgave her, I thought that he decided to be the bigger man and forgive her. And when I read it,my heart just...broke. |
nessieblackfan chapter 1 . 9/25/2012 Haha I like this especially the twist at the end. Feeling so sorry for Draco then it turns out he cheated first. |
aina.akkarin chapter 1 . 8/15/2012 That's just twisted... loved it :) |
dayflow chapter 1 . 8/14/2012 omo, the prompt is SO DRACO! i was so confused until i got to the end. very well done! :-) |
Madelinea chapter 1 . 8/14/2012 How sad for them both :( It was creative and I think you should continue it. Well written! :) |
LalalandMuse chapter 1 . 8/14/2012 This was really interesting and original. The unusual format made it enjoyable to read and the surprise twist at the end left a satisfying ending. Truly a great short story. :) |
CrescentMoon12 chapter 1 . 8/14/2012 Oh the suspense. This is off to a really great start, I think. I like the way you're writing it, makes it more interesting haha :) keep up the good work! Update soon. :) |