yay for happy endings!

Having finished - hope you don't mind my saying, you could use a good beta reader. There are some weird grammar and spelling issues that detract from the story, and also a couple of things like changing viewpoints between Josh and Donna without making it clear. That can be very confusing and spoils the moment a bit.

That said - I really enjoyed this. You made me laugh several times, you have some really spot on bits of dialogue and stuff, and it's really cute. Plus, any fic which gets Donna and Josh together is naturally a Good Thing. But yeah, you did a nice job invoking their characters, and you entertained me and made me smile... Good job :-)

"it is just sometimes I think that my little Abner, with his secret plan to fight inflation, is too stupid to live."

LOL

"Her side of our conversations are less about philately and more about, you know, actual stamp collecting."

That made me laugh, as did "bespectacled boy wonder"

Very special, very stupid puppy made me, I kid you not, SNORT.

I loved Sam's reaction, I can so hear in my head him saying she's turned into a crazy person. I laughed.

I also know unfortunately the pain of that kind of revelation, you described it really well.

Adorable. I'm borrowing the remote control line. Loved the whole story.

Too funny. I was really hoping that Sam would goad Josh enough that he'd break. Donna, shut up and let Sam do his best (worst?).

I love romantic comedies when everyone is confused about what is really going on and this is no different.

Too funny.

Totally love this story
Just so perfect and sweet
Love it

Enjoyed this on JDFF, thanks for posting here

"I also think I scared the crap out of CJ and Toby when I ripped passed them and grabbed my purse without even saying a word." - "ripped past them".
"I maybe prone to jackasssery" - "'jackassey", what a thoroughly cool and apt word to describe Josh's behaviour.

If I were Donna, I would have run long ago, when I was first busted, not wait until the time she did run.

"Oh, idiot boy, really? Sam? You are getting bent out of shape over Sam?" CJ is giving me this look, as though she is talking to a very special and very stupid puppy." - LOVE the look CJ gave Josh.

"Who wants to dance?" I quickly scan my tiny group. Well, Toby is an automatic no, I can't even imagine him dancing, I think the sight of Toby dancing would upset the balance of the earth like the space-time continuum opening up, which is a very bad thing based on how it is whispered about in those Sci-Fi movies." - Hehehe, I cannot even form a mental pic of Toby dancing.
"I could sleep you." - "sleep with you".
Poor Sam and Donna! BUSTED!