Yay please continue it's so good so far that is! :)

You should make another chapter! This is really good! By the say, this is the girl that commented on you're status on facebook asking for you're fanfiction account!

ermghed! love it! seems really realistic. want to know mooooree!
(my apologies for my abuse of the coffee shop below my pokey little flat. i'm a ... little hyper...)

great story so far, update soon please

why make Draco evil?

Excited to see where this goes. Nice job!

It's okay. There are a ridiculous amount of mistakes. You need to do some serious editing, but after a lot of work, it would be much better. You seem to be switching between present and past tense. If you aren't an experienced writer, past tense will be easier for you. Also, there are lots of run-on sentences. If you want, I can help you edit. You use too many commas. You need more periods. It's creating an odd mash-up of the dialogue and the descriptions. However, it does have potential greatness.

CHIENNE. LOVELY. D: I will never write as good as you. Fred, George, Hermione and Draco haven't fallen out of character, and that's what I REALLY like.

p.s: I really hope you don't make Draco the enemy. D:
p.p.s: Even though I mentioned it, dontreadmystories.
p.p.p.s: IS DRACO GOING TO BE WITH HARRY? I HOPE HE DOES D:

Great story :) #Subscribing