Reviews for Little Moments Classic
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 15 . 7/8
I started with the classic version because it looked like it had happier story tags. I really, really don't want to read something even darker than this.
Someone chapter 25 . 6/25
This is absolutely the best Bwen fanfiction I have ever have portrayed the characters so well and kept it till the end of the story.
I just hope there are enough moments from Ben10:Alien force in the against I would say this is simply amazing.
Someone chapter 16 . 6/24
I think this chapter had the best ben-gwen moment in your story until just don't get to read something like this everywhere,it was simply amazing.
Storm Pegasus chapter 5 . 4/21
your story till now is good, but I feel that you were not able to properly convey what you wanted and I could nor properly understand what the situation was about, but i guess that is one of the reasons why you are rewriting this.
WootWoo chapter 24 . 4/4
I started reading this just to see how much you've changed between this version and reboot. I also intended to stop after reaching a point I no longer recognised. But after reading the latest chapter realized that you've changed quite a bit and added SO much to the reboot I could deal with some mild spoilers.

That said it's interesting to see just how far you've come. From passable to pretty good to great to now holding a spot on my top 10 online stories list; with an ONGOING storry. Something that's only happened only once before.

I may be a bit spoiled for potential basic plot but I'm also curious about what's going to happen with the stone now that you've changed Bens reasoning.

p.s.
I amost stopped to coment on Ben' having good taste picking out the classic Evil Dead and Gwen might have enjoyed Army of Darkness.
Then almost again to laugh at him about believing he could watch only half The Princess Bride. Ha I could see Gwen totally stopping at the half way point just to tease him. ah good stuff good stuff.
wrecker159753 chapter 26 . 3/26
While I cannot wait to see some more of breaking point I really enjoyed this and I'm looking forward to reading the new little moments can't wait to see what you do next keep up the great work
Nost.Algia.reads chapter 12 . 3/4
And again, I re-read as I wait for the marvelous continuation of the rebooted version off little moments.
bigbossxx6 chapter 24 . 1/9
Thank you for this amazing story
bigbossxx6 chapter 17 . 1/7
Finally, and really well done if I do say so myself.
Hinate chapter 1 . 11/21/2019
Bwen forever...
This fanfic was just too much for lil heart... which just won't stop fluttering throughout the fic...
the feels were off the chart, I've loved Bwen for as long as I can remember just yesterday I kinda was like why I never read their fanfic... and here I came... damn this was just sooooooo amazing that I can't begin to describe how it felt... it felt completely real... even saying loved it, can't begin to describe it fully...
idkusernameoatbuit chapter 1 . 10/13/2019
One thing I’ll say for sure, this fic definitely isn’t PG-13.
christinedbadia5 chapter 11 . 8/18/2019
Wow. This took a dark turn real fast.
thetyrant67 chapter 21 . 8/5/2019
When it comes to love there's nothing that can stop a pure-hearted maiden. Especially, a magic-flinging maiden like Gwen.
sarah.k.p.t chapter 23 . 7/15/2019
I loved all the way to the end this fanfiction! Many others do not preserve the essence of the characters and the stop feeling like Gwen and ben. But you did incredible! I am obsece. And you have been portraying very good the transition to puberty in this and the sequel.
Thor Cosmic chapter 24 . 6/19/2019
Finally posting this review after being fire up with "Courting Disaster". Since the LM rebooted epilogue will not happened for a while, I decided to post my current thoughts here.

The LM classic was good, like the dating dress up moment. There are issues here & there (Like lack of hero scene), but overall I'm happy, especially with how you decided not to "directly" used "Goodbye & Good Riddance" & the continuation to Alien Force. That OS finale was overall weak & lazy. The thing that tick me the most, is how much injustice they done to Max Tennyson. It was an utter insult to him being 100% wrong in keeping his & grandchildren's live a secret to his family & the world. There is no way in any reality, that nothing "Super Enormous" happened to the Tennyson family within 5 years AF. That is a huge & long time. Their summer adventure was a lot to take, even when it is just a few short months.

Something big like the world meddling media, the S.A.C.T came to capture them, or an alien connection with the human world as we seen in Ben 10k, that the human world accept & change drastically. It was a like the OS writers thought "Heck its the last ep, I can do whatever I want & get away with it, and let the future staffs handling the bad finale" (Which AF is still bad especially in later seasons). In OS, people just accept everything like it was no big deal compare to Ben's bullies with the "saving the president" garbage.

I apologize that I sound negative while praising your amazing work, but oh man, somebody here got it, & create a more realistic & better situation. Your LM Rebooted not even finish yet, but is already legendary. I accept & respect your rebooted decision 110%. Thank you for coming back Shadows59. Thank you.
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