So, where is the uncensored version?

that is good. update soon please.

Nicely done. The detective with the "stressor" was good to be investigated. A little surprised on the family connection, but coinicidents do happen and it helped you wrap up the story more quickly.

This is a well put together case. It isn't their usual, but we have seen episodes where they are brought to flash-points by spree crimes and escalating serial crimes in the past. The story would work - having Reid as the decoy for such a case - or at least this version of Reid - even without the rest.

Well done. Good humor and good bonding with trash talking. But the actors are 18 years apart in age, and it appears that Reid is two years younger than his actor so that makes is 20 years age difference, if you don't adjust Hotch's age.

OMG. Except for the inter-office romance part (which I will accept for the sake of this story), the situation works. Very plausible. Poety hair and eyeliner, plus dressing younger. The question is did they leave their IDs at home (due to really tight pockets) or were they pick-pocketed. I can't see either of them not at least carrying their driver's licenses, credit card and a house key. And of course a reasonably hot pairing in fantasy land. Thanks for sharing. ;)

I loved the story and the laughter that went with it...update soon when u get the chance too

Nice.

love this story! write more please :)

Oh my gosh, I love you. Wait, is that too soon? I don't want to mess up our relationship so early on... It just all just happened so fast... and now I can't quit you.

My Favorite part? The tbc at the very end. :)

this was fun

I love your story! Im not huge on slash but i really do love this story! I though it was going to b phelps as the murder/rapist. *shrugs* oh well, i was a LITTLE (even though tht isnt very little. I couldn't get it to be italicized!) off. Okay maybe a lot off. Tht was hilarious about how u made the glitter fall on them. I love your story, through and through. Is this the final chapter?

The young genius just stuck his tongue out at the older man who rolled his eyes in response. Seeing that he couldn't get a rise out of the young man he turned to their unit chief, "Make sure he puts that thing to good use."

Morgan studiously ignored the exchange but Rossi and the girls broke out laughing when Hotch turned pink and sputtered, "Dave! Dammit, just go home." The team cheerfully waved bye to each other as they parted for the night.

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OMG - I am so LMAO at this! XD

lmfao
love this story sooo much
cant wait for the next chapter