Well, thank you for at least warning us for the Yamcha bashing so we have the option to choose not to read.

I'm just totally fan of this fic.
I know even more how many times I read it so I like it, but I've always been a silent reader...not now.
I like everything, the fact that the story is nothing have with the original story, not power, not sayian, just of the normal people who are friends and who have a normal job, I love this kind of fic to the base, but your's WOW! I like the fact that yamcha is bad (sorry for the fans), the fact that vegeta is as it is.
Short I like, I love, I'm fan, it's very well written, it's beautiful, it's sad, it's moving and especially happy ending, it's just perfect. BRAVO simply.
sorry for my bad English (I'm French).
Thank you very much.

I love this story, you should do a sequel or something like yamcha escapes. Or you could do a prequel showing bulma and vegeta getting together.

Go Vegeta, go!

Nicely done. I like this story.

I can really tell how much you dislike Yamcha. I'm not really a fan either... Anyways, good story so far. Loving it right now!

Nice. I enjoyed it.

it was great but wish there was more

YAY!
It was NOT a dull and boring ending... it was just short.

So... that's how Yamcha got his scar!

I've always hated Yamcha!
This only proves he's a cheater!
I LOVE THIS STORY!

I loved how you end this story. I hate Yamcha way b4 i read this now my feelings increased. Vegeta & Bulma forever!

beautiful and wonderful

ha ha this was funny yamcha really got what was coming to him

aww sweet protective vegeta and goku awesome