How goes the next chapter?

Nice crossover!

Alright I like what I read so far and I got to say that I liked the interaction the Eds are having with the people of the park and I like how you gave Nazz a job at the coffee shop and I wonder if you plan on having any of the other kids from the cul-du-sac have summer jobs where the Eds are at anyway the story having a good start and I bet it might get crazier as time progress at the Park.

So can't wait for the next chapter Jaroberts251 signing out

nice job on this chapter and man Eddy is really having a blast

I wonder how Mordecai and Rigby will react when Kevin will be put in and call them dorks, like the Ed's. Hurry up with the next chapter! I wanna see.

Okay, I'm really late on this update, sorry. But I gotta say this was a cool chapter. I liked seeing Nazz at the coffee shop. That was a nice addition that I thinik you pulled off well. And character interaction is quite good here. You write these characters really well. This was nice, I look forward to the next update.

You know what will be awesome? Have the Eds join Hyperduck.

great work on this chapter it was nice to see a bonding episode between the Eds, Mordecai and Rigby also wonder how they will react to the wackiness that is regular show

Alright, so I decided to give this story a look since you asked and I will give you props to having the characters stay true to themselves. However, it doesn't help at times the dialogue feels so stiff, and speaking of the dialogue, boy do you have a lot of it here. I would really cut down on the dialogue and focus more on showing to the readers instead of telling. You shouldn't have to always state who's talking for the dialogue either, it looks very repetitive and the readers should be able to pick up on who's speaking sometimes based on their dialogue alone. It's true that introduction chapters can easily get awkward and tedious to write, so I won't blame you for finding them to be a pain in the ass.

Still, one thing I noticed is how even though the premise of this fanfiction implies that EEnE and Regular Show are in the same universe, the Eds' reactions to the Regular Show cast would strongly say otherwise. It's important to note that according to J.G Quintel the show's creator, all of the characters are people like you and me despite their outward appearances. This is why Margaret has a human dad and a robin mother, because they're both people. It's also why Mordecai, despite being a blue jay, has never been shown flying in the series since he's a person, not a bird-man. A reaction like Ed saying Pop's has a big head would've worked, but outright having it Ed call Mordecai and Rigby "cute critters," really breaks the flow of believing the characters. Plus it's strongly hinted that the EEnE series takes place in the same universes as Danny's previous shows, "The Brothers Grunt" and "Lupo the Butcher," so if monstrosities like those are normal in the Eds' universe, I doubt the physical appearances of the Regular Show's cast would have bothered them as much.

So, overall I think I would've had the two shows' universes more intertwined from the beginning, as if it's regular (pun intended) for the Eds to see all the weirdness in Regular Show. I also would've aged-up the Eds to at least being sixteen (seventeen for Ed since he's a year old than Double-D & Eddy) so they could believably work at the park. I'm pretty sure Benson's breaking some child labor laws by hiring some twelve, thirteen year old kids to work at the park. Yes you can have kids as young as fourteen legally work too depending on the state, but that's only reserved for jobs like McDonalds or a family-business. You can have a story have wacky, cartoony antics involved, but there have to be some set rules and laws for the world you've created so the reader can believe it.

I'm sorry if this review's been too over-critical, but you did ask me to took a look at your EEnE/RS story for advice. I can see EEnE and Regular Show working well together in a crossover. Granted nothing long term, perhaps with the Eds' as interns for the park like Thomas was and with some deconstruction thrown in there as well, and don't ever forget to take BPS into consideration (the amount of EEnE fanfictions that ignore BPS disgusts me). It's also very important to learn of all the metaphors Regular Show has within it to get through CN's standards (ex. hot wings alcohol). At least Regular Show is a far more believable show to have the Eds' put into rather than KND. Still, I can tell you really like writing The Eds Rock, so don't ever stop doing that. Just remember to seriously think about how the characters from one setting would be in another, and to always strive to improve as a writer.

I'm so glad the Eds are in this part of the story. It's gonna be so amazing. :)

So what happens next?

SHAME ON YA EDDY, SHAME ON YA INDEED!. I MEAN POPS WAS BEING GENEROUS TO YA, DORKKY!. :(

Seeing which idea is coming through. Nice. Good writing, I loved everyone's character and it was nice. My favorite jokes were the one about Muscle Man's lines and the gumball jokes. I laughed way too hard at the latter. Keep it up though.

Good to see Mordecai giving Double D a hand. Not sure if your still updating this story but I'm following just in case.

Dammit Eddy! Why are you such a jerk? Seriously though, This story keeps getting better and better!