Reviews for How Unbecoming |
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naruhinaqueen chapter 1 . 3/15/2016 Deym feels… literally crying my eyes out rn (and it's been a while that I haven't cried because of a fic and I don't easily cry) ... This is beautiful but truly painful. |
asthenia.oet chapter 1 . 8/14/2015 Wow. This story was deep and depressing. But I think that it get the feeling about losing someone, and Naruto was so realistic... Very nice work. I love it! |
Louricam The Manga Freak chapter 1 . 10/14/2014 This brought tears to my eyes, good job! |
field innocence chapter 1 . 1/20/2013 You fool! I was kinda shock and disappointed he chose to die rather live a new start. Anyways, the story is great, sad and tragic. Pity Naruto greatly, and cried for Hinata's death. A sweet thing like her should never be forgotten, but she always worries about others before her own life that's why i love her. |
Still LuvXHugs chapter 1 . 11/18/2012 So...I was looking through my review history and I saw this and noticed so many typos. In my defense I was using my phone. Anyways, my previous review was meant to say: I read a fic like this too. It was a ShikaTema one. I don't remember the name but she died and he kept on seeing her or something like that. She was pregnant and stuff before she died. That fic made me tear up and so does yours. Better? I know it's wierd that I'm doing damage control now, months later, but when I saw my review, I couldn't just let it stay. |
PanopticBibelot chapter 1 . 9/18/2012 I rea a fix like this too. It was a ShikaTema one. She dies yet she was still there and he kept on recalling memories and she was pregnant and stuff. Sousa wierd but I lt es amazing like this story. It made me tear. This story and that other one. |
charmedprincess101 chapter 1 . 8/25/2012 This was so beautifully sad. I love it do much. I feel so sorry for Naruto. After his beloved died and months of depression he finds out that he was going to die in the end as well. Even though he had a choice to choose life he chooses death and it was all because he didn't want to forgot Hinata. That was so sweet. |
VioletDemon241 chapter 1 . 8/24/2012 Beautiful...Just absolutely beautiful. Keep up the good work. |
AnimexFreakz 0.o chapter 1 . 8/24/2012 Wow, this was really sad but I liked the ending in a sick way I guess. Because that's how I wanted it to go I guess, they could be rejoined in heaven! -kitty . |
randompandattack chapter 1 . 8/24/2012 great ending |
Ryuujin96 chapter 1 . 8/23/2012 It's unfortunate that this is only a one shot as there was more you could have done with it, such as the reactions of his friends, do they try to change his mind, his final days and hours and finally a true reunion with Hinata in the afterlife. This one shot is great either way. |