I know this is about 6 years old at this point, but I don't care. I'm going to write a good review about a good fanfiction no matter how old it is.

For some reason, I'm a sucker for the crossover trope of "Dani encounters the main characters of [Franchise] and ends up getting adopted by them." That said, a warm and fuzzy trope as a premise doesn't necessarily mean that it's a good fic. Executed badly, and I'd have nothing to say about it, as I don't like to tear a fic to shreds, since I wouldn't like that for one of mine.

Im impressed with the attention to both canons you gave, with the obvious exception of the famous "I am Iron Man" line not happening in this world.

In addition, I'm impressed with the level of attention given to the B-plot of the story, that of Dani getting used to school and making friends, enemies, etc. With such a fic, it would be tempting to focus on the Big Bad in the form of Vlad, but you also give significant attention to the fact that Dani is building a life outside of ghosts and heroes and whatnot.

That said, there were some minor problems I had with it. None of them are story-breaking, but in the name of a fair review, I think they need to be addressed.

For starters, I would rather believe that Danny's note was in some kind of ghost cipher than that both Tony and Jarvis would be unable to translate it. In addition, while I understand that you have plans for Zeke in the sequel, his presence in the last chapter felt shoehorned in, like there was a more realistic way for him to be involved, such as coming out to see the commotion.

Style-wise, I had some issues with shifting viewpoints. It's a problem I see occasionally, that when covering events from two viewpoints, authors have a tendency to relay the same details both times. Different people look at situations differently, and different details stand out. In addition, it helps to keep the story from being too wordy, like not repeating the laundry list of superpowers that Dani has, for instance. On that note, I'd probably expect Dani to have to think about her powers, and probably demonstrate them. That last point is more my personal preference, however, though I do believe that it would slightly increase the quality of the story.

In conclusion, this was a great fic, and I enjoyed reading it even after 7 years from when it was written. It is my hope that you are still writing, if not for this site or other fanfiction sites, then for yourself and/or your friends. You have a talent that does not deserve to be wasted. In addition, I hope that you have improved as a writer after all this time, possibly to the degree that the flaws I pointed out would not happen should you write the story now, or that similar flaws are now absent from your writing.

I know it's long, but I only said what I feel needs to be said.

I honestly like the little touch! Everyone seems to thing religion in fanfictipn is taboo but I honestly think it adds some depth

I could translate to esperanto if you wanted. Not fluent, probably an eterna komencanto (eternal beginner one of the few Esperanto figures of speech) at this point but I know some!

I just realized that if Vlad could clone Danny then why didn't he either clone Maddie or create a child containing both the DNA of himself in transition and Maddie?

This is an old fix but for some reason I keep coming back and rereading it. The first time I read it I have no idea how I found it considering I've never watched any of the ItonMan movies. But I really enjoyed it, because I love Danielle and basically any story with her in it. Either way, I keep rereading this fix because it just makes me happy to Dani in a good place because we never got a proper ending with her in the show. Good job with this, even though this is years old.

kinda creepy tony

You know, after rereading this fic out of boredom i have realized one major flaw in this entire fic.

That no one is suppose to know Tony is Iron Man. This cannot make sense on the canon side to Iron Man because he straight up tells the world "I am Iron Man" at a press conference at the end of the first movie. And since we can already establish that Tony has been Iron Man for a while by the fact he's currently still in a relationship with Pepper and he controls the suit without difficulty it should put all these events after IM 1.

Characterwise, Tony wouldn't care who knew he's Iron Man, in fact, he often brags about it in the IM movies and avengers. He's too egotistical to hide and didn't want to hide because he wanted to fix the whole "Warmonger' image his weapons company painted him in. So making a big reveal like that to Dani and the gang should have been pointless because by now, the world would have known who he was.

Including Vlad.

Just had to get that out of my system. It was bugging my for awhile.

this is amazing u rock keep it up!

Very Enjoyable! ( my name was supposed to be the comment, but I accidentally typed it up there and I was to lazy to change it.)

Vlad is the Lex Luthor of Danny Phantom he'll just buy his way out of prison

Just one word: RESPECT

"better security system than the Pentagon" and yet his house still got blown to shit.

Love the story!

:3

I really liked it- the plot was good and not too fast. However, there were, a lot, of commas, and, run-on sentences. Luckily, Anyone can work on that to improve it, and you're no exception.