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  Anon chapter 28 . 6/21 So many different things, so many different feels. 1) I enjoyed hating Tenzin through this story. For being an insensitive ass, for cheating with Pema (who I also didn't mind hating to a lesser extent), for being an ass afterwards, for naming his kid JINORRA, for freaking out about Lin and Bumi. 2)I loved the Lin/Bumi buildup and dynamic. Very saddened that Sokka had to die right before it, I actually forgot that he dies lol so that writing got me good. 3)Lily is adorable, the way you closed out the story was amazing. IMO you gave Lin a level of happiness/family I wanted to see her have in the series, without making her OOC. Just wanted to you to see that yes, four years after you completed this, it is still appreciated and enjoyed. Thank you :) |
 mariaaaaa here chapter 28 . 1/19 PEMA HAS SOME NERVEEEEEE, that bitchh and tenzin too. the nerveee he has to invite lin to his wedding after he cheated on her. this was a really great story, i loved loved loved it |
| lulu2613 chapter 26 . 11/4/2019 Pema should have apologized for naming their daughter Jinoria. I forgot to say the last chapter was both beautiful and heartbreaking. |
| lulu2613 chapter 25 . 11/4/2019 That was beautiful |
| lulu2613 chapter 24 . 11/3/2019 I’m Yours by Alessia Cara would be perfect for Lin and Dive by Ed Sheeran would be perfect for Bumi! God I am so in love with this pairing! |
| lulu2613 chapter 17 . 11/3/2019 Aww little Mako and not even born yet baby Bolin! Umm I would like to know how Bumi knew Rei didn’t have any family? Did he look her up after? Or did she mention it? I remember her mentioning she was new in town not much else. |
| lulu2613 chapter 3 . 11/3/2019 I am loving this story! |
| lulu2613 chapter 23 . 9/20/2017 Face it Pema your always going to be his second choice. |
| lulu2613 chapter 16 . 9/20/2017 Pema took advantage, but he didnt have to sleep with her. He could have stopped, he should have. |
| lulu2613 chapter 12 . 9/20/2017 He desrves to burn! I had a bad feeling this was gonna happen this way. |
| lulu2613 chapter 5 . 9/20/2017 Aww he really does have feelings for her. |
| lulu2613 chapter 2 . 9/20/2017 Before I found this story or it found me I was team Tenzin, but then you opened my eyes to the possibility of Bumi. |
| lulu2613 chapter 1 . 9/20/2017 There was this moment between Lin and Tenzin on the show and I always wanted to read a story that explored their history. Thank you for granting my wish! |
| lulu2613 chapter 4 . 9/20/2017 Tenzin met Pema when she was a baby!? That is just all types of wrong. |
| DDMorgan chapter 2 . 4/7/2017 Very good. I love this starting out. |
