I want to read more please write more!

PLEASE WRITE MORE! PLEASE! I'M BEGGING OF YOU THIS IS GETTING GOOD! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!

Continue it already!

I nearly fell out of my chair. Thanks a lot.
Please don't twist my feels like this. She can't be with Megatron. Okay? She just can't! DX DX DX

Whoa... totally wasn't expecting Megatron... AT ALL...- Mind.. Blown... XD! You got me hanging here! Whats going to happen Hm!? Seriously when she said his name I actually fell out of my chair because I jolted backwards causing my chair to fall from being so surprised! My mom was like... "uh, you alright?"

Now I can't help but wonder what the heck happened and whats going to happen! :D Please continue to write it! I would really like to know whats happening between the three, Optimus, Megatron and Ariel!

Hey :) Love the story you have going here, really liked the end of chapter one! Update soon :D

This story is awesome please continue.

":D love!
RUN B!TCH, RUN!

Wow! Too funny! Orion so shy and goofy acting around Ariel was cute and funny.

This chapter really did come together nicely. I loved the part you added with the bracelet! It adds to more Orion cuteness! hehe
And *blush* at the top. All credits got to you. The title included. I just point out some grammar and sentence mistakes.
But anyways this story is very promising and I love the writing style. Keep it up, buddy because I see success in the optics of this story.

This is really promising!...would love to hear more! I really like the writing style.

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OMFG! !
reasons for loving:
1) it's awesome
2) it's TFP
3) it has a plot
4) OMFG, SUSPENSE! :D
5) it;s aweosme

I love Optimus and Elita-1 together please say that they will be reunited later in the story

Cool!

hmm...this story is rather interesting. Breakdown and Knockout were a nice touch btw XD Wonder how Ariel will react to seeing Megatronus (and I mean in more detail XD)