I am too confused to finish this story. It is too much to follow and more of a fantasy than a story about an anime. I hope others enjoy it but it just isn't what I hoped for.

Hello, I honestly don't understand the real reason of your abandonment of the story if I could better clarify I will be grateful. Kisses

An interesting prologue and I agree it was a good way to lead into the story. I am sure Rin is not dead or there would be no story, but it has been established Sesshomaru thinks she is. That is important for it will shape his mood and emotions from here on I am sure. The only constructive criticism I can offer is some of the sentences were very long. It is a simple edit to reword them or just add a period here and there, no big deal. Something to think about if you ever repost it.

I love this story!

please update when you are able to

Whaaaat? Please come back! I know I'm late, but please finish this one! I'm so excited about the next chapter! I'm begging you come baaaack!

Estou realmente curiosa sobre a continuação dera estória. Nunca pare de escrever. Abraços

Estou relendo a sua fic e espero que você volte a escrever, faz muitos anos mas ainda tenho esperanças. Abraços

Very nice story. Loved Renshi very much. Where is Sesshomaru? How come the Snakes are sable to free the darkness. I would love to know why and how Sakura's human lover got turn into the darkness. You really should complete this story.

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please don't forget about this story please update soon thank you

I like the story and cant wait for the next chapter, I wonder who is the parents to mamoru and his sister.

Eu gosto da sua fanfic, escreva mais, abraços

Pretty good story, I hope you are still with this story..
Please update, I want too see what happens next. ;)

please continue i like this storie is interesting