Oh my.

I wish you would write more about Xehanort and his adventures.

Anyway, keep on writing!

-truth

Wow, from a brilliant, cute boy to a creepy maniac in less than 3000 words... and you made it actually work, too. I can't start to tell how amazing this piece was. Not only was Xehanort's character, and his transformation, exactly like I had imagined, but you managed to show us that little bit extra that I can't even put into words. I loved this, keep up the fantastic work!

:D! I loved it! I loved it!

Xehanort is so smart xD. This fanfic really shows his anylitical prowess. Now he's gonna go crazy.

Anyway, this was very well written and I liked that seaweed part. It's the beginning of his obsession with darkness :D

Sorry my rewiew sounds a little choppy, but thanks a lot for this awesome story!

Wow, I really liked this! :) I love how you chronicled Xehanort's love for the outside world starting from his childhood; that would definitely make sense. I couldn't help but go 'aww' when I read the part where he was with his father. xD By the time he was ten though, I was surprised that he was already in high school! I mean, I know he's smart, but wow. Guess that's a child prodigy for you.

I want to say more, but I really can't description all my feelings at the moment (I'm at work). I will say though, that this was very well-written and definitely in-character for Xehanort's more youthful, younger personality. The way you described his surroundings by the time he was ten and fifteen made it appear as if Xehanort's world and vocabulary grew with age. :)

Awesome job! Going into my favorites!