Aint nothin but a heart break.

As mentioned before, you could have gone more into how Lexi got everything together, explains a bit more about everything that happened, the magic involved, all those stuffs. I would personally very interested in that. (After writing this I realized I has gone to a new chapter, this was meant for the last chapter with the sudden appearance of the hideout)

Some minor grammar mistake. but all neglectable

I think you might have a bit of a pacing problem? The idea was extremely good but the execution was a bit flawed.

I think I must've read too many fanfictions, because the writing style and the speed in which thing going is a bit jarring for me.

Some part got over explained whilst some never got much attention.

I think that the only beef I got with this story, beside that, I haven't gotten very far to really say much about the idea. I always love OC stories.

So thank you very much for sharing this, and I know how difficult it is to write something coherent, I tried and failed spectacularly.

Awesome title!

ok so I was ch 170...and forgot to check up on this book only to find it completed...so I power read the hech out of it...

There is no Gerard in Fairy Tail! I think you mean Jellal, I looked it up and Gerard isn't even an alternate name. I just thought that you might want to know

Wow, boy did this story follow canon for a LOT of parts, right up to the chapter names in many cases! I would hope that a sequel would provide more resolution for characters like Ultear for instance...

Is it really the end!? Not a Cliffhanger!

A good ending to a good story.

Well done!

Cannot wait for the sequel :3

Yay I love happy endings!

No, why do you do this to me?! Poor Rogue. hang on shadow boy.

Don't listen to the guest review that spouting out bullshit keep going your almost finished with this amazing fanfic the reviewer is probably filled with hate and has a shitty life

I don't see much future for the Americans ... it's a decayed country. And they have their racial problem, and the problem of social inequalities ... my feelings against Americanism are feelings of hatred and deep repugnance ... everything about the behaviour of American society reveals that it's half Judaised, and the other half negrified. How can one expect a State like that to hold together?

Just fucking die in a camp, Jew.

So will human and dragon lexi become one again? I hope so.

The war is over and now Fairy Tail has to save Lexi before it's too late.