So far pretty sweet. No pun intended! I'm quite curious to see how this all unfolds, but given the last time this was updated, I get the feeling it might be a while. Well, I can be patient. So whenever you decide to update I'll be waiting...right here.

On another note, you have a nice writing style that flows nicely. The characters are all very true to themselves, and the storyline was clearly well thought.

This is so adorkableeee

Aw!
Could you please continue this... it's awesome!

dosnt marciline find true love? At the beggining of this I thought that Marciline and Finn where going to hook up. Then I thought that Marciline and Princess Bubble gum where going to hook up. So many mixed thoughts. I think that you should continue with this, it is very interesting.

that was so great. this may be late but i hope your friend gets well. i hope you finish as well, write on write on.

oh come on, i need more yes.

hehheh, such a sucker.

cool story... it kept me reading.

What you have written so far has been super cute and just great in general! Great characterizations and an all-around fun premise made these five chapters fly by. Thank you for sharing!

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Wondering when you'll update this. Other plans, maybe?

Lol, maybe boyfriend, isn't really what she needs

Well then Marcy hates saving the day, who would've guessed? She's too punk to really want to, but when push comes to shove she'll throw herself in front of the bus if it means Bubblegum is safe

Also I would have thought the fall plus landing party would have done more to her new human form.

This is why we don't steal other peoples donoughts Marcy

Awwwww, how... sweet! :D (runs away from bad pun)
But yeah, i love this story, and you would be totally awesome if you kept updating this (but i secretly already think you're awesome) :O