Holy fuck. I didn't see that one coming...though the warning should be a dead giveaway. I loved this. I love the unique way you used to present Ken's downward spiral to hell, and the last line, that just *hurt*. I love this and I will definitely remember this story for a very long time. Job well done on this.

Awesome I love it

*sobs* S-so sad! I'm crying and trying not to show it to my little sister, cause she's looking at me strangly. I'm not usually supportive of Kensuke, but this-! It's just too sweet! And, and, and, well words just can't accurately describe how angsty and mushy this fic makes me feel! Wah! *river tears* The way you wrote this is so descriptive, if just a little too much. But it's still better than I can do now. No! I'm crying again!

Wow...just...wow. That last chapter was amazing. The ending was beautifully done, I never knew what hit me.

I do have to say, in way of constructive criticism, that there is one flaw in this fic and in the other fics of yours I've read. The use of metaphor in your writing is lovely but often overdone to the point of distraction. It jolts me out of the rythm of the story when something is OVER described in conflicting comparisons, redundant synonyms, and run-on sentences. As well done as the descriptions are, you need to pick one or two, or even three, and just let the others go.

Other than that, wonderful. The style of this fic reminds me a bit of "What the Sybil Said", another excellant ken/dai story. Seek it out if you haven't already read it. Maybe it will help you to perfect your art to read that of like-minded peers? In any case, I sincerely hope you continue writing in this genre. Really sincerely. REALLY really sincerely.

Yeah...so, keep it up, ne?

There is description, and then there is too much description. Your description is much too weighty, and yet somehow under that jumble of adjectives, a jewel of a fic is discovered. I worship you for what you can do with this confusing flow of words. -

You are the one of the best writers I've ever seen. And you've improved my vocabulary... quite a bit. 0.o

I've read all of your fics except Saccharine, which I'm slowly but surely ruminating at present. There's so much to be gleaned from them, I don't feel I can do them justice in a review. So I'll just add them and you to my favorites, and that will be that.

Keep writing! *hugz and kisses to the greatest author alive*

~Fyredra~

Ah yes, once again my mind has slipped into that crazy little state I like to call 'Insanity'. I really love this fic, I've read it several times before, and it still remains as one of my favorites. Congrads, I've read alot, alot of fics, most of them remaining in 'angst', and this continues on as my favorite. That's something. But now I sound full of myself don't I, well anyway.. keep up the great work!

Wow... *stares in awe at the beautifully put together story. Oh my goodness... YOU HAVE A GIFT! MOREEEEEE!

Geez, this story is so sad, but still, I love it.

dksafj. Pretty epilogue. Very pretty.

This was the perfect Epilogue. I enjoyed reading the whole thing, it just took a moment to shake my focus from the story first. ~J~

...wow. I just read the whole thing, and right now, the only word that even begins to form in my mind is wow. This is incredible. I mean...intensely, beautifully incredible. You're one hell of a writer... Wow. I love the way it was mostly all a daydream...I love the way it ended...this is a very pretty story...

That was so good! It made me bry. ;_; I loved it! Thanks!

oh... you were right, i DO love this. and now i'm crying and people probably think i'm crazy... honestly, this is so wonderful. i wish i knew what else to say, but i don't think i know the right words... beautiful work.

Good god almighty. I think that sums up whatever I may have to say about this pretty well. I adore chapter three's entire angstyness (but that's a given), and chapter four is the most beautiful piece of literature I've ever seen; it flows so well despite, and maybe because of, the time gaps and all-around haphazard chronology. And yes, yes, liquid eyeliner is a difficult task to master . . .

i'm trying not to cry, i really am... and i'm not sure whether it's the fic itself or the quality on its own- most likely both simultaneously, but any way it comes this is one of the best fics of yours or anyone else's that i've read in a long time. i eagerly await the epilogue...