Reviews for Too Shy
Apples 'n' PB chapter 20 . 4/28
A well-written and compelling story, but him slapping her makes it hard for me to ship them. I feel a little disgusted by Erik.
Quiettiger49 chapter 26 . 2/13
good. she went back to erik. I would have been unhappy if she hadn't
sable sable sable chapter 31 . 6/29/2018
Archer is a complete asshole and I hope just to see his neck being tied up by Erik's lasso. Yes, it's extreme but true. Some game developers should make a Archer Yandere simulator.
ourloveisgxd chapter 21 . 4/15/2018
AAAAAA
I LOVE THAT SONG
ourloveisgxd chapter 4 . 4/15/2018
how emo of ella
ourloveisgxd chapter 3 . 4/15/2018
aaa sweeney todd
Guest chapter 31 . 3/5/2018
When is it ever cosidered ok to listen to a jealous brat's advice and kidnapping someone? The answer, never. WHAT THE ACTUAL HECK, ARCHER?! I feel as if Archer is more than a few fries of a happy meal. When I read that he was going to ( COMPLETELY FORCE) take Ella to America, I had to stop and remind myself that I did not have the power to rip out people's hearts and crush them like Regina can in OUAT. HE'S MESSING WITH THE UNIVERSE'S WILL OF ELLA/ ERIK OTP! GAHHH! THAT STUPID, ANNOYING LITTLE. . .beeeeeeeeeep [Dear viewers, this rant of the reviewer is still going on, but due to all of the swearing being used, we have censored it in order to try and keep it PG.] (finishes swear filled rant breathing heavly before evening out) I feel so much better now. I'm watching you Archer. (Holds thumb above Regina's speeddial)

Your loyal (albeit slightly angry) reader,
Guest
CharitinaX chapter 17 . 3/13/2017
HAHAHAHA.

Ohmygod, I haven't laughed this hard in so long. Just imagining solemn Eric singing a Wham! (or god forbid the Taylor Swift version) of Last Christmas has me crying in tears of laughter.
VioletEyedPrincess chapter 51 . 2/9/2017
That was completely beautiful. It was an amazing work of art and I was hooked from the beginning. Great job! I loved the character development and how Erik finally realized he needed to be himself and that he wasn't a monster. I looked forward to reading your other stories. You've certainly inspired me.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/5/2016
SWEENEY TODD!
tobehonest21 chapter 51 . 10/17/2016
Wow what an amazingly well written story- fell in love with it from the first chapter and couldn't put it down :)
sophie Schreiner chapter 1 . 7/18/2016
read this so many times I love this story
fanfic authoress chapter 51 . 6/8/2016
This was adorable! Thanks so much for writing this.
ForeverSunshine13 chapter 51 . 5/13/2016
What I need in my life: more Erik/OC stories. What I'm glad I have: this story. Loved it to the moon and back!
Guest chapter 21 . 4/27/2016
Ah Les Miserables. A nice exert of the movie.
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