Umm... Nah. Doesn't suit me. I would try, really, but the summary and the chapter just doesn't suit me. I liked the AN though. That captured my attention.

Very sexy. Nice job. It made me apprehensive as I read it because I kept thinking that at any moment, Moriarty might just hurt Moran and I had no idea what he was going to do, which was really disconcerting. Over and over, I thought Seb was just gonna get really hurt. Kept me on my toes. Mark me down as scared AND horny!

Though I thought I would mention that in the third to last paragraph, you say "groan" where you should say "groin". In fact, the other writer of this story made a great deal of mistakes, but I didn't keep track because you weren't the one who wrote it.

Oh, and I'm really sad about your writing partner bailing on you. This story is so good. I would write this with you in a second. Anywho, I hope you eventually finish this, because I really enjoy it thus far and I REALLY want to know what Sherlock and John do when 221 gets burned down. That made me SO SAD. Basically all of the letters made me just want to know what Sherlock and John were going to do about it. And I need Johnlock fluff and smut really bad. So yeah. Thanks for existing. Again.

HOLY ACTUAL FUCKING FUCK, WOMAN. This is astounding. I don't have words for how amazing that chapter was. Everything was gorgeous and perfect and I might have fallen in love with you just now, sorry. Holy fuck. Alright, guess I'll just go to the next chapter and fucking die because this story isn't finished.

Man, this story. I love how you two are just throwing each other curve balls. And I both love and hate how slowly the Johnlock romance is developing. Mostly love, but it makes me itch for some sort of escalation. I want to just finish right now but I have plans for school I can't neglect, unfortunately. You always devour my life when I start reading a story of yours. Damn you, woman, damn you.

Whoa whoa whoa dfjsdklfjdsklfsdkfkdskfdldfjdskldsxfdsklfjsfkl;sdfjk SHIT JUST GOT REAL. Wow, I'm articulate today. Well. Onto the next one. Though I just realised that this story isn't finished and it makes me quite sad.

I finally decided that I need to get reading on this. I dunno if I'll review every chapter, but I'll certainly give another at the end. So far, this is fantastic. Your Moriarty is always so brilliant, and this chapter was such a great display of him. I was laughing out loud at him being a woman, and I gasped like an idiot in a silent room when he killed Bruce, so casually that it gave me chills. As usual, amazing thus far. Off to the next chapter! (Though, admittedly, I'm trying to read this while having a Harry Potter movie marathon, which is distracting.)

Fabulous chapter! Was that not a nice, hot round of MorMor smut or what? ;)
I'd love to get a good look at Jim's suits.
Forte

It's good to hear from this story again (especially how it ended last chapter). And I have to admit, the sexiness in this chapter was a good way to make up. Hope to read from you soon. :)

Dude hurry up with the next post! Seriously I need to read it! Please don't stop!

OMG! I though this was complete! :P
While reading this chapter i was like: wait a minute...i don't think this...holly fuck*#! Sh#*$! He is getting craziert (don't even know if that word exist) by the our! Sherlock must be...Oh no, now he writes John!...and so, and so...
Please, please, please! Tell me when are you going to continue with this history? That was the biggest cliffhanger EVER!
I will tore my room, and bitte my nails until bleeding until you post chapter 6!

Hi there again!
I loved this chapter, specially because i have some issues in my house...health issues, and the general mood is very down; so i went and read this and.../ Relatively happy againg!
My favorite? The end, because you managed to rise our hopes, and then destroy them in two phrases:
Rise: "What I'm saying," John repeated, tightening Sherlock's hand right back, a look of determination on his face. "Is that we have to stop waiting. We need to find him and take him down."
Down: It was only days after John got out of the hospital that the first of Moriarty's letters arrived.
XDXDXDXD
Is funny too because the letters can be about anything, but of course, they are from Moriarty so...i don't think so. He is the most wonderfull-machiavellian-mind in the word (at least, Sherlock Holmes's word) so...that letter...no good.
Now...T-T, i have to go to work (shi*%#"!)
I'll try to read in my phone, but i just hate it (the screen is too little!)

I love how you write Moriarty! The perfect match between brilliance and madness!

I couldn't stop myself! I got to read chapter 2! :D
The plot thickens, and Moriarty is more, and more, and more creapy each time.
I didn't understand well the thing with the mug...was it in the middle of the street? OoO
No matter what happens now, you really now how to get and keep your readers attention!

As i promised, i'm reading all of your fics!
This one, very interesting because is from Moriarty's point of view...well, at least some chapters.
And he is...my feelings for him are...contradictory. I think HE IS the best villian ever, and at the same time is so funny! XD But of course, at the end, HE IS a villian, who just want for sherlock to suffer, so... my poor heart is being pulled in two complete different directions...
So...i think i'm goint to sleep because tomorrow i have to work T-T, but i'll keep reading, don't worry! ;)

NEED...MORE...NOW!