I remember my awkward first kiss. Lol. Cute story.

They are a bit young don't yah think? Changing the ages would be nice. Not enough theon x sansa fics out there!

This was good. You don't read too much about Theon and Sansa.

Oh wow this was so well done, while sexual tension between a young adult and an eleven year old girl is usually pretty damn creepy, what the hell this is a song of ice and fire! I thought you did brilliantly here describing Theon's thoughts and reactions, and the whole Sansa/Theon pairing is a very rare and interesting one. I loved this and hope that you do continue it at some point as its a real gem!

This is simple, short, and sweet. Theon's narrative is charming, as it displays how much an adolescent male he really is. I am quite surprised Lady Catelyn wasn't a little miffed but then that would only make things more complicated. I think this is fine just the way it is. Hope you don't mind if I add this to my faves! :)

This was certainly interesting and I can't help but think of how a relationship would or could develop between these two.

Even though I am SanSan fan, I still think Theon and Sansa are sweet together. Well written.

Loved It!

Very sweet !

OMG! This is beautiful! I love the Theon/Sansa, they relationship give to do a lot of things and this is in Theon's way, to cute (: 3

You did a good job of showing how naive Sansa is, and how foul-minded Theon is. I feel terribly sorry for Sansa in this story, for the rest of her life, when she looks back on her first kiss, she'll remember it didn't come from a man who truly cared for her, but from the traitor who betrayed Robb, took her beloved Winterfell like a sneak thief, and killed Bran and Rickon (she doesn't know it was really the farmer's boys.) Theon and Joffrey are fruit off the same rotten tree.

As for Theon, I find him pretty easy to endure because I know what's in store for him, Balon Greyjoy's arrogant son. Reek, Reek, it rhymes with sneak...

This was nice!

Aww this is adorable! This ship is far too under-explored, they'd be very cute together!