Damn Kevin snitched

Wow this story is truly amazing, thank you so much for writing it! JT truly is a hero and needs all the love and healing he can get!

I'm pretty sure I read this forever ago but I just found it again and it's still absolutely lovely and fantastic and I love how you portray everyone and everything about this fic is perfect

So touching. I kept crying since ch3. I'm glad the another child know that JT's fine & still alive & will kept contact with them from now.
The crew of enterprisse are awesome!

Ouch.. that one hurt. Very, very well written ...

Great story! I loved the part where Jim finally let his emotions out and cried.

OH my goodness, this is the blue ribbon winner of all the Tarsus IV fics. Brilliantly told.
-InkWizard

nope. didn't cry...

AMAZING story! Loved the way events unfolded and the interactions between Kirk and the crew!
God Bless,
SW

Very sad in the beginning. You can just feel Jim's emotions as the others tell about JT. Like the ending as well as they all heal together.

update soon

Oh. My. Goodness! I'm gonna cry, like, messy, snot all over my face cry! This was beautiful! Like, perfectly written and described. Jim is one messed up SOB. But, at least things will get better now! This is interesting cause I haven't put a whole lot of thought into what happens after Tarsus. Like, in my mind Jim always ends up telling Bones and then some how basically everyone else finds out! Oh I can't get over how amazing this was! Did I mention that I'm crying all over right now? Seriously, I almost started crying SO many times reading this! And that's weird cause I'm not usually a cryer! Anywho, thank you SOOO much for sharing this lovely story with the world! I feel all warm and fuzzy inside now! XD

Bittersweet. Great telling of the story - enjoyed your twist (the dedication ceremony).

nice ;)
even if I think it's strange for Kirk not trying to find any of his "kids"...
you could say that he couldn't because the files were protected, or that some stupid doctor said to him, that all were dead... or something...
anyway... you are a really good writer ;)
congratulations ;)

Good story overall. I would however suggest breaking up the large paragraphs; they are somewhat daunting to the eye and too many words clustered so closely together can have a bit of a disorienting and blurring effect.