I'm enjoying the story so far but Shepard is way to easy. She is moving on way to fast and is coming off as a bit of a slut. Flirting would have been fine but after such a serious argument between her and Garrus she should have been more hesitant.

Nice and sweet ending!

Yea! Cat fight! Well... turian fight. XD

You definitely have my attention. Great start!

Really sweet ending I loved it

Glad to see this updated! This was a nice chapter, and even though I'm sad this is ending, I still thoroughly enjoyed reading this fic! You are a good writer!

Thank you for the closure to the story. I really enjoyed reading it.

This is an interesting story and I'm happy I've read it! Can't wait for the next update this is getting juicy! Is it bad that i was disappointed when I read Mia was alive? Don't get me wrong I'm a strong Shakarian fan but I enjoyed Theros and Garrus fight over Alex.

I was trying to get into the story as I really liked the idea but you have written Shepard as an immature teenager that even writes in txt like one. I'm pretty sure if shepard did act this way she would never have reached the title commander or don't well in the military due to lack of professionalism. I understand that in game you have choices that determine her personality but no options allow for her to become a hormonal teen that acts like she's thirteen. I read what I could until I lost any feeling that your Shepard is just a SI done in a poor way.
My advice would be to revise adult relationships and behaviourisms and Shepards basic character in general. She may be a paragon or renegade but she doesn't have hissy fits or speak in chavish (constant swearing) these are not an option because of one thing- in the game they wanted Shepard to look professional no matter what the choice. Here I think even Conrad Verner would make a more professional Spectre/commander than your Shep.

Hahaha tottaly like Joker's line XD

I love this story so much

I'm so excited that you're back. This is getting really interesting.

Ooh, Mia is still alive? Theros is gonna feel pretty bad about all the fighting with Garrus lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!

OMG, the last part of that chapter made me like, 'Whaaaaa?" Jeez, you need to write the next chapter soon! I can't wait! :)

BTW, glad to hear you're getting better!

Really loving you story! Can't wait to read more! I'm also reading your other story's love them too! I hope you feel better soon, being sick is the worst.