Switching between third and first person point of views makes it hard for a reader to keep up with the story; it gets confusing. You should have someone beta your story.

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This story's great! Please post soon!

This story is still great, and I hope you did we'll on your exams! Not that I have a one track mind or anything, but if you didn't eat a burrito since last chapter you should eat a taco before the next. No pressure, or anything;D please post again soon! Thankyou!

Good luck on your science exam! When you celebrate, post another chapter, and if-IF- you get a bad mark mabe posting another chapter will make you feel better? This coming from the biased can, but whatever so long as you post another chapter. And do great in science. And eat a burrito.

I still love your story! So sad...:'( but awsome! Please post again soon! Thankyou

Another great chapter! Why dosent she like magic? I mean she could take her instruments with her to hogwarts to play. Do you play any instruments? Because I completely understand what you mean about being kind of calm and happy whilst playing. Guitar and piano all the way!

THANK YOU! I loved this chapter! And YAY! You have already written other chapters! Please please PLEASE post again soon! Thankyou!

This is SUCH a great story! I LOVE IT! Thankyou for this and PLEASE post soon!

Loved it, as always! Your characters are all so fresh and interesting. I think it's great how music is such a big part of the story for Isabell. This was a very sad, sweet and interesting chapter all at once and you did a good job writing it! Can't wait for more :D

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Awesome chapter! I loved the song again :D It was great when Isabell was getting sorted. I'm glad she's in Slytherin and I also like how musical she is! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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This is awesome :D I love all your characters and you write brilliantly! I don't know much about rugby but it's I think it's really different that you've included it in your story. I can't wait for Isabell to go to Hogwarts! Just one question though - what was the song in this chapter? Cos I don't recognise it. Did you write it? It's great!

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This is really interesting. I love how you write :D This makes me sad for Isabell but I want to know if Voldemort is going to help her eventually. We're doing a story where Voldemort has twin daughters and he's mean to them like he's mean to Isabell, but maybe deep down he does really care.

Anyways, I really love it so far. Please write more!

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